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pacmax1978 [2015-09-23 11:31:01 +0000 UTC]

Great job!

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ultraman400 [2014-05-09 19:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Amazing.

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ILutimus-Prime [2012-05-07 21:12:11 +0000 UTC]

Here is the Scene for this Part of the Story.

Optimus Rendevous at the coordinates that Ilutimus Prime sent him earlier. He looked around and found not one trace of a decepticon anywhere. He did not make it on time… It started to rain, and Became Very cold and Bitter. The Rain was Glistening his metal and washing away all of the dirt that was showered over him. ILutimus... He thought. Where could she be? Then, a mile away..he saw ILutimus Lying on the ground Unconsious. He became Very Upset and Nervous. He thought he would of lost another Comrade in the fate of them being gone by the last time…. Cliffjumper. Then He ran to Ilutimus who was leaking in Energon and decay. He Picked her head up very slowly and Gently so he wouldn’t hurt her any more than the Decepticons did. She was Very injured and had many deep gashes and scrapes all over her body. “ILutimus.” He said very intently. He knew that she, was long away from gone. In hopes of saving her, Optimus Called for Medical Attention. Picking ILutimus up very lightly, he looked at her knowing that he might night be able to save her. He frowned, and became very sad. He had a connection between him and her. He could feel it. As if There Sparks were meant for each other. He stood up, and walked back to the ground bridge cradling Ilutimus in his Arms.
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Optimus Prime walked into the room slowly were ILutimus Prime was Held at. She was Still completely injured from the last sight of the decepticons battle. Optimus Was worried, Can you blame him? He looked at Ilutimus very carefully, and stroked her light, energon hair. Then ILutimus Prime woke up and saw Optimus hovering over her. She was happy to see him on the account of the last time she saw him-Holding her in his hands. “Optimus….” She said softly whimpering at her aches and pains she had from the battle. Optimus looked at her gently “Please, Rest, you have fully recooperated yet.” ILutimus Sighed and then slowly drifted away into a Stasis. Optimus knew that he had to look over her until she had been fully recovered.

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Comsing8 [2012-04-29 04:26:17 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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beautyamber12 [2012-03-23 23:34:28 +0000 UTC]

*Sniff* Dont worry optimus...shell be alright...

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ILutimus-Prime [2012-02-22 15:41:11 +0000 UTC]

wow it looks even more amazing! thanks for letting me know on the update! I will definitely add this when I get back from Vacation!

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Cloudywolf117 [2012-02-09 04:57:02 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of the trailer to the game Transformers:Fall of Cybertron. I like it.

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Soul-Reader [2012-02-06 08:05:19 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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primenatorgirl217 [2012-02-05 23:20:53 +0000 UTC]

This is BEAUTIFUL...some of your best work to date!!

And it's so emotional...Optimus's expression makes me want to go cry and hug something now.

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RATchael [2012-02-05 05:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Lovely

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BunZleFlufF [2012-02-05 03:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Its romantic in ways, you just gotta really look at it <3

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Belldame [2012-02-05 03:48:18 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job!

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Transformerchick [2012-02-05 03:06:16 +0000 UTC]

its....[sniff] SO BEAUTIFUL AND SAD!!!!!
Good job!

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