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Published: 2016-12-07 22:41:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 265; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description This is the second time I have ever attempted to paint digitally and to be frank, it looks terrible. The only reason I tried this is because I was inspired by spechie (youtube channel).
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jerrtato [2016-12-08 00:46:00 +0000 UTC]

I like the blend of your char's outfit, especially on her right shoulder
with the dark line, it gives her a lot of depth, especially
from where you accented the hair.

Either way, you're on your path to promising shades, mate! 
To me it seems like she's leaning against a wall or
sitting on a bench, and that's cool.

Not to get nit-picky, but
the pupil (all of the green on the eye) would be black,
and then you blend the green into the black (or
surrounding a black circle in the middle).
For all eyes [unless you're making demon or other being],
there's a pure white on either corner to show reflection
(imagine a checkerboard).

In fact sometimes artist curve the white reflection
to give the eyes more depth.

Overall, I think her green eyes aren't bright enough and/or filled in enough,
but you did well on her outfit, mouth/nose and hair.  :]

For a quick example check my DeviantID

P.S. I saw this late, since I passed out... mb for not
being able to comment right away.

Hope this helps and doesn't offend. 0 .0

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ModPunchtree In reply to jerrtato [2016-12-08 23:29:53 +0000 UTC]

Ah don't worry, I'm not one to be too offended by anything and I did realize that this was terrible at the time of uploading.
P.S. How do you have the time to type such lengthy and in depth comments as well as drawing? I barely have the time to draw never-mind anything else

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jerrtato In reply to ModPunchtree [2016-12-09 00:10:15 +0000 UTC]

I was typing from what I've tried out really, and also it's a mixture of being familiar with you and
that you also seem to be interested in animating (doesn't matter what kind). 

I'm a baddy bad, I work with two screens, one to focus on art, and the the other to look at art / upload art. 

Communication is important to me, so building a relation with you and
providing feedback you can use means a lot to me. 
I can't do it all the time of course, but when I can, it's messages like these.

In fact, you intrigue me from the time I saw your animation lip sync test. 
Saying that life is a test... but, I think it's a chance.
You don't have to put yourself down; it's progress.

--
But, why do you upload your art just to call it terrible?
If you want to see terrible, then don't draw anything at all, because [nothing] is terrible,
and something is awesome.  I don't mean to sound harsh, but you keep that
mindset that your work is not good, and it's bound to destroy you one day.

[[No one's telling you to stop, and if they do, it's because THEY'VE stopped.]]
--

///// plus it goes to me writing a lot, so I can't help it.  It's almost become second nature.
I have a pet void somewhere in my mind that has been tamed, and I can just call upon it whenever,
then it ups and releases things into the world.  Fact, I might have to make an OC out of it.  Shadows...

But, this said, like your style mate.  As I go along with my animating (it won't only just be ponies, you know! 
Humans coming soon) I'd also like to be able to do requests for you of any character that you'd like to have move.


I can't help but notice though...

You talk to me as if I'm just going to up and forget about you over one drawing(?).

Here tho, I think you'll like this journal post.
jerryvhern.deviantart.com/jour…
 

Sample:

"Pain passes and is gone, only a void
caught upon your heart and chest
after it has upped and tricked you
into thinking your soul is lost."

You seem thoughtful, bashful almost, and this might be relative
to your overall thought process / moral foundation.


P.S. I'm sorry if I sound crude or arrogant.  Ugh, this is why I dislike my pet void.  >.<

 

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