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Moiji — Slicer WIP
Published: 2012-05-15 05:57:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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This isn't quite working yet, so if anyone has some advice or critique to offer I'd be glad
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Probably wont be as specific as this schlammsuhler guys even though he's hitting all the points spot on. The body shows an angle proportion, as if his mid section is pushed in and his chest and waist area is pushed out. The knife would replicate the same effect you pulled on this picture you drew a while ago [link] But the blade is short so i dunno if you'd show the whole knife or just some of it either or the blade half of the knife would be the biggest piece in the picture, not so big it takes up the entire screen but big enough to know that its the main focal point. The hand would be a follow up. With the lighting i dunno, it seems as if its coming from above so i believe more highlights and contrast in the front and the front of the face. I could go on and on but it be pointless cause it just be stuff you'd already know and hell what do i know. Its still a great picture bro, you should finish it
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Wow, this critique is artistic gold!
Thanks so much!
Its really great to get your insight into this stuff, it helped me fix a lot of the problems i nteh picture, at thats what I hope. Gonna post another WIP soon.
Getting some feedback while working on stuff is really helpfull, maybe I should work like this a bit more often.
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It looks like he is falling backwards. try a strong spotlight from the lower left...
Also try a hard backlight!
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Yeah, I can kinda see that now.
What do you think, is it the perspektive of the room that creates that effect?
Maybe the viepoint from which you look down on the ground is too far up.
Defenitly gonna try the new lightsorces
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Ich hab mir des so vorgestellt, man hat ja oft das Gefühl zurück zu fallen wenn einem etwas so richtig arg ins gesicht strahlt. Da kannst du dich gut an diversen Magic TG Karten orientieren. da sind viele solche Posen. Und ja es ist die Perspektive, heisst aber nicht dass es falsch ist. Ein guter Künstler findet einen Weg dass es trotzdem genauso gut aussieht, nur aber interessanter ist weil man solch eine perspektive ned gewohnt ist. wie philosophisch^^
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Ah... verstehe.
Ich hab das ganze jetzt a bissl überarbeitet, es hat jetz tstärkeres licht von links und weniger frontale beleuchtung. Als ob das licht eher von unten koomt.
Du liegst ganz gut mit dem punkt ja, ich hab die perspektieve noch ei nbissl "verstärkt", der post über dir war da auch sehr hilfreich.
Du kannst dir ja ansehn wies geworden ist
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Well the pose seems false but you cant change that. try to make some psychadelic contrast effects. Just try out what looks strange and works nice with the pose.
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Yeah, it really bugs me as well. Unfortionately I already rendered quite a lot of it, but i might just not give a damn and redo it anyways.
This is kinda ment to be a practice piece, sicne i feel i spend too much time tweaking every little aspekt of my works, insted of jsut producing a lot of them.
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PRACTICE PIECE. So practice crazily how to make it better somehow. Noone minds if it looks badass.
Instead of having some fun you mean
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sounds sad when its said liek this, but to soem degree maybe ^^'
nah, at some point just refining over and over gets boring anyway, new pictures are always fun and get you more experience with every piece
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