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mokmok07 — Over The Fantasy -Demo- PG 5
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Published: 2007-01-09 05:12:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 947; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 18
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some of my friend said that they wanted to see this story longer, so i planning to make it longer 2 or 3 pages. hope you guys were no mind it. by the wat same as usual i make by my art partner Wacom intous 3 "he" realy help me a lot on drawing in PC. by the way if got any grammer mistake plz inform me or correct me. wanna kiss this time?haha ;D
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Over The Fantasy-Demo- PG 1
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Over The Fantasy-Demo- PG 2
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Over The Fantasy-Demo- PG 3
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Over The Fantasy-Demo- PG 4
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Over The Fantasy-Demo- PG 5
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Over The Fantasy-Demo- PG 6
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Over The Fantasy-Demo- PG 7
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Over The Fantasy-Demo- PG 8
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Comments: 16
Oh No!!!! He's so kesian!! I wanna cry for him 
Anywa, how do u do all the effects??? U used computer or something else?
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I am realy happy that you love my story ^3^ chu"
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Very nice...your use of tones is wonderful and I am really liking the story so far.
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Thank you now i just finished PG 6's sketching maybe 1 or 2 days i'l finish. Actually now i try to pull the story longer, because my friends said that 6 pages is not enough'em so they suggest i put the story longer.
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Hmm, I think the speech bubbles could be less too much oval all the time, try a little round, so the text would be so much squeeze on the top, fat in the middle and slim again on the bottom.
The third panel speech for "___...", totally weird when you have use two type of silent speech. I recommended go for one type only.
Do note ppl fingers have different length, that a fatal mistake in the far top left panel.
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I'm quite lazy on the speech bubbles so i just use the tool in PS and past it T_T. and i'll try edit the mistake. thk heist luv u so much 4 helpping me ^3^ chu"
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Did you read all of'em by the way? so far understand?
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Maybe you want to ask what the story talking about?
erm this is a demo version of -Over The Fantasy- it is because this is demo version so i no truly go through the main story, but i go through what had happened on male and female character. Specially the male character. If you see all my CG you were find out, some of character have an difference eyes and ppl keep asking why. so i use this demo manga to explain the process.
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U mean? i don't understand the words "neding" sorry my english is noob T_T
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Er....I mean ending of the story......
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