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mokmok07 — The 2nd executive Part 1
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Published: 2006-12-01 17:34:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 710; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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First i had to say sorry =_= because this is my 1st doujin, so maybe it will unstable.This story is abot a team of students were chosen by their principle to become 2nd executive. As usual 1st executive will manage about students things, but second executive's work was to manage mystery cases in a 1000 old school.
This manga was themed with funny event!! Enjoy!!
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Comments: 18
background....background!! I love the bg!! O___O I wanna do something like this tooooo!! TT^TT
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Actualy i'm scuk on BG also T_T
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BTW: Could you prepare a zip file ? Maybe put your doujin in a zip file, as it would be more convenient. I'd love to read it. Here's my email.
ewar_1806@yahoo.com
If you haven't got time, it's fine. Just a suggestion. ^^
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sure i will, but i don't know how to provide download in DA? do u know how?
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you could upload in sites such as savefile, and then send the link here. ^^
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Mmm.. maybe later sorry ^_^ i got draw a new manga feel free to read it
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Wow, nice art here. It's not quite Japanese style, but you're developing your own style here. So it's all good. Im sorry to hear it got rejected. I hope your break will come.
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don't worry ^_^ i'm ok i just know he purpose want reject me, even the poster he did reject also, but his standart was.....
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keep it up!!! u have taelnt in this XD
jus that ur lack in expreince..
but i believe that WONT hold u back rite? XD
take cares man~ XD
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Thk for support me, noe coffee-ping is editing my dialuge
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Hey!! you can't you had to buy that also.. my friend was inside. like keara his art is better that H.. so don worry la
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er... i read it =_= are you sure he was the person who reject you.....? can't believe. actually.... no need to say if people see his/her comic and compare with ur....... Let me tell you something if normal person will no buy that =_= it totally can fight "raws" and keep up mokmok!! i support you!! his comment is just jelous about your art!!
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So you did reject!!?? OMG with this standart you recjet. so that mean their art is greather that you lo. can you show me, if can >_<
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Oh i had read your manga. it is realy funny.
i love the dragons it make me laugh a lot.
so is this your doujin going to publish?
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Realy thank you!! yes but it recjeted
the reason that he give me is:-
.......u really want to hear the real thing?...... i dun accept ur doujin because u didn't improve urself since the last time i saw u, and i did say that im confused with ur story, i can't understand what r u trying to tell in the doujin, the doujin really gave me a big "swt" on my head
and i had correcting ur drawing for many times, but i dun see the particular problem being fixed, instead i saw the same problem repeat and repeated again
and i did gave my members a chance to submit earlier so i can point out the mistakes and fix it so i won't fail it
althought u can draw special effects good, but u dun seem to get the propostion and anatomy right, drawing human seems to be ur weakness and humans(char) are the most frequent thing which appear in a doujin, except u want to draw mangas like "Weed" or "Gon"
if u still think that ur doujin is good enough, please go and show it in the unfinished/critique: doujin, dun spam ur post here, it won't do u any good
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