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MoKuzuu — [OYJ-OCT] Round 2

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VS. ‘s Alistair & Sasha

Individual pages    -----> sta.sh/267zpfw8l1z?edit=1
Uncompressed PDF -----> OYJ-OCT PDF (Uncompressed)

Round Two....Or 'Pay Your Tax'. 

I’m sorry it’s a really sketchy round and might be hard to understand (I had some real life things pop up), but I wanted to fit in what I can, and prioritized more of the story than the art (though I still have things I wanted to change and fix). My rounds are more a fight with time than with the actual opponent now. I am hoping it’s not too hard to follow and I’m happy I got most of what I wanted in!

I had a lot of fun thinking of the plot though and Alistair & Sasha were very fun to work with; it was really run thinking of where to show Alistair’s spells for this round. I hope I was able to do them justice! 

Cameos:

’s Kali

’s Sam Clemons

’s Leroy Clemons

 

Small cameos:

’s Sister Illythia

’s Xal & Xel

’s Kai

Bean & Gym

 

Judges characters:

’s Emtu'um

’s Equinox

’s Taika Niran

’s Mr. Sunshine

 

Daniel's Reference

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Only now do I realize the font on the title page went wild, I'll fix it after the judging period. I'm really sorry!

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Comments: 22

perplexingPariah [2019-11-30 17:52:56 +0000 UTC]

you are a POWER HOUSE for drawing >70 pages HOLY MOLY

I hope Daniel and Kali find each other ;-;

It was really interesting to see you explore how "luck" factors into who become "mages"! 
I have a story that sort of explores that...! 

Can't wait to see your next round!!

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MoKuzuu In reply to perplexingPariah [2019-12-01 00:18:35 +0000 UTC]

I am going to keep on forcing random pages into everyone's
throat XD 

Thank you for reading this round, it was really fun to draw 
(though I had to rush it) and it was fun drawing Leroy  

Oh, I would really be interested to see your story too, I 
hope I get to see that one day!

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perplexingPariah In reply to MoKuzuu [2019-12-01 04:31:22 +0000 UTC]

I'M SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG... I've had hundreds of deviations piling up for so long and I'm finally down to 2 digits... 

I was happy to see our precious borb humans in your entry ;w; Thanks for including them!!

alskdfjsdf one day Moku, ONE DAY 

Also if you don't mind me asking, how do you compress all your pages into PDFs like that? :0

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MoKuzuu In reply to perplexingPariah [2019-12-01 07:16:56 +0000 UTC]

No, it wasn't long! I can't believe you were even able to go
through it (and even comment), it was a really long round... 
Thank you so much!
Ooh, alot of things to go through! It will be a fun but long
ride XD and I might make it longer again... or not...

I hope that one day comes soon

I use a random site on the internet to put them all together!
(You can do it on an adobe acrobat Pro too but I dont have that
so....) I can send you the site but if you put 'merge PNG
to PDF' into google, something should come out   

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ChimericMachinations [2019-11-21 06:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Daniel has -5 to perception but +10 to being adorable and nice.

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MoKuzuu In reply to ChimericMachinations [2019-11-21 07:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you for the comment  
His lack of perception makes me wonder how he got this far... XD 

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ChimericMachinations In reply to MoKuzuu [2019-11-22 00:46:48 +0000 UTC]

Luck and being adorable.

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AquarelleFox [2019-09-05 16:31:25 +0000 UTC]

Judgemental cat is judging (|)___(|)


This was a fun entry, it got a lot of giggles out of me

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MoKuzuu In reply to AquarelleFox [2019-09-05 20:05:44 +0000 UTC]

The cat sees all (|)__(|)

Ahh, thank you so much, I'm glad to hear that  

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Spottedheart140 [2019-09-05 12:51:46 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOSH HUUU LOOK AT MY BOYS AND DANIELLLLLL HE'S SUCH A SWEET BEAN!!

Yo, even if I finished my round, I still think you woulda won LMAO This great!!! <3 <3 <3

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MoKuzuu In reply to Spottedheart140 [2019-09-05 13:35:43 +0000 UTC]

YOU HAVE GOOD BOYS, I had so much fun drawing Alice and Sasha,
I hope I didn't butcher their characters too much (and the Fae King too)...!
Thank you for answering all my weird questions, I honestly owe it all to 
you that I had so much fun with this round....

What are you saying, your round was amazing up to the part I read and
I still don't know what kind of magic you used to be able to get those pages
out in three days XD

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Spottedheart140 In reply to MoKuzuu [2019-09-05 14:49:00 +0000 UTC]

HUUU YOU'RE TOO SWEET ( You did fantastically with them! Honestly I'm happy it was you I lost to, cuz I really look forward to see how you'll go in Round 3! All the character cameos were BLESSED I'm happy to see they're all okay

LMAO you're so welcome!! It was super sweet of you, and thanks to the weird questions, you got my character's personalities perfect!!

huuuu you flatter me sdfgfds I wish I had done more!! > You deserved a more complete round to go up against--  the magic of
fear JHGFDGH and over-confidence, thinking I could get those AND school work done sdfgfd 

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MoKuzuu In reply to Spottedheart140 [2019-09-05 20:09:15 +0000 UTC]

Ah I'm glad to hear that I got them right, I kept on going though
liking the round and getting really worried about the round whilst
I was doing this one...I think I know a little more about DnD 
spells now, atleast! XD

The magic of fear and over-confidence is scary, I don't know why 
I thought I could line over 50 pages either... XD But I'm glad I 
didn't change the story just to make it shorter, I'll keep on saying
it but I really had fun with drawing Alice and Sasha in the story, so
thank you again for all the help!  

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TheNarffy [2019-09-05 07:13:25 +0000 UTC]

Excellent round, Moku!!
I'm loving your writing and your art is always a treat.

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MoKuzuu In reply to TheNarffy [2019-09-05 13:32:31 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thanks so much! I should put you in a special credit section for all the help you gave me ;w;
Thank you for letting me use Kali too! I was really happy I got to draw her interacting with Daniel again,
it was really fun  

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TheNarffy In reply to MoKuzuu [2019-09-06 12:10:09 +0000 UTC]

Naaaahhhh
I only gave suggestions. This story was all you, pally.

Of course! You're more than welcome to continue using her if you'd like. I love seeing how you write her and Danny interacting. It's so cute and entertaining.

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MoKuzuu In reply to TheNarffy [2019-09-06 16:22:22 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thanks, but with all seriousness, I should really
thank you especially for letting me use Kali again, since
the story would have been really different without her  

Yay I have permission for my next round, if I get there XD
Get ready for all the questions again... >:3

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TheNarffy In reply to MoKuzuu [2019-09-07 00:49:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem at all! I'm always happy to be of help! ;w;/

I LIVE for answering OC-related questions!! >;3

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RandomsHero [2019-09-05 05:09:14 +0000 UTC]

Such a great round Moku! You did a great job of incorporating different aspects of the previous round and loved the development of Daniel. Best of luck!!!

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MoKuzuu In reply to RandomsHero [2019-09-05 13:33:21 +0000 UTC]

Ah thanks so much, I was really worried about the story so it means alot
hearing that! I'm glad the incporporations worked because they were really
fun to think of.  

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Insomniac-Hatter [2019-09-05 04:12:38 +0000 UTC]

IM SCREAMING I LOVE IT I WANNA CRY 😭😭😭

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MoKuzuu In reply to Insomniac-Hatter [2019-09-05 04:17:37 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, thank you! 
I need to learn to draw bigger panels so I can draw the cameos bigger... XD 

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