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moldygrape — Control Freak Syndrome
Published: 2005-02-07 00:03:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description suspected from the beginning
your lack of appeal
for beauty and its freedom
tied back while the angels fly
and when it rains
you know someone's dieing
then lock up the pain inside
once gone astray in battle
your soul and mind collide
a voice carried on a whisper
sent to aid only you
when all others have died from shame
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Comments: 10

MoonlitShadow [2005-02-08 19:02:33 +0000 UTC]

nice work, i like this alot.

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CherrioRocker [2005-02-07 20:07:48 +0000 UTC]

lol fucking awesome. ^-^ I luuuurrve it.

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PinkHairPrincess [2005-02-07 02:27:01 +0000 UTC]

heh heh heh i love that pic... ur wareing my PIMP HAT yay

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GarbageMan-Dan [2005-02-07 00:48:54 +0000 UTC]

ThatGuyOnTheStreet said it all, but the ideas and feelings behind this poem are awsome. I can tell.

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moldygrape In reply to GarbageMan-Dan [2005-02-07 01:00:09 +0000 UTC]

tankya

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makennasboyjeff [2005-02-07 00:14:20 +0000 UTC]

ooooo i love the meaning

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moldygrape In reply to makennasboyjeff [2005-02-07 00:30:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-02-07 00:13:59 +0000 UTC]

A tad rushed, it seems. The subject matter is also confusing...nice symbolism, but it seems rather unused.

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moldygrape In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-02-07 00:30:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks i love you too

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fuckieduckie [2005-02-07 00:05:36 +0000 UTC]

nice hat. bowler hat right?

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