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Published: 2005-01-06 03:25:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Pathway:Hidden behind a door of its own
Screams:
A soft lullaby to guide her
Immunity:
An unworthy cause for her kind
Truth:
So binding
Lies:
Still breathing
Insanity:
Bleeding through her veins
Fallen:
Perhaps the world has stopped
Darkened:
A heart unheard
Love:
A tale so forgotten
Pleading:
Down in her knees, she has failed
Starved:
An ignorant battle ceased
Dieing:
And she wonders if this was supposed to hurt
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Comments: 11
Jack-O [2005-01-13 01:50:01 +0000 UTC]
I fucking love the format.
You're becoming a good poet, mah dear. <3
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MoonlitShadow [2005-01-07 03:15:04 +0000 UTC]
wonderful, i love the way you did this...great work
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Rowena-afar [2005-01-07 02:39:57 +0000 UTC]
wowowowowowow...great job and idea. I like how you did this
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moldygrape In reply to Rowena-afar [2005-01-07 02:41:57 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the fave, rowen!!
glad you enjoyed it, precious
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mutexvoice [2005-01-06 22:37:52 +0000 UTC]
woah. that's interesting....I like the
"Love:
A tale so forgotten"
because it's so true now adays...this brings tears to my eyes...
because it's so lovely...
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the-weird-one13 [2005-01-06 05:18:46 +0000 UTC]
tizzite! shawoo shabang! haha i sed shawoo! u kno im gonna fave that poem thingy cuz me likez it
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makennasboyjeff [2005-01-06 03:59:17 +0000 UTC]
that is sooo sweet....im glad you let some of that out
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ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-06 03:37:42 +0000 UTC]
Change "dieing" to "dying" and you'll be set.
Very mythological. Sounds like somethin' you'd read from ancient Rome, methinks.
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