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moldygrape — Hell Swirls Round
Published: 2004-11-26 05:57:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 36
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Description [chorus:]
suffocate my lies
starve me for attention
break my spirits
tear me limb from limb
lock me away
a stranger to my eyes
i cant help but cry

i'm not crazy
just a little pained
sometimes i bleed for you
push me farther
i'll jump
i swear to jesus
that fuckin' bastard

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experiments and testing wont do
you cant explain me
i'm a little of everyone dieing
their tears run through my veins
i cant help but bleed them away
and let them finally be free

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dont pretend the world is fine
you'll think like me soon enough
we're all doomed
you'll see...

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Comments: 22

GarbageMan-Dan [2004-12-28 05:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Orrr your an alien

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moldygrape In reply to GarbageMan-Dan [2004-12-28 05:33:18 +0000 UTC]

SHABANG, THATS AWESOME!!

i lurv aliums

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GarbageMan-Dan In reply to moldygrape [2004-12-28 05:35:58 +0000 UTC]

Please take my life.

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moldygrape In reply to GarbageMan-Dan [2004-12-28 05:57:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks alright my dear you need it more than i

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GarbageMan-Dan [2004-12-28 05:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Your inhuman speed of replying is enough to hope that there are more intelligent beings that can wipe our species away saving us the bitter embarassment when we do it ourselves to ourselves.

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moldygrape In reply to GarbageMan-Dan [2004-12-28 05:29:49 +0000 UTC]

lol, is that supposed to mean i'm smart?


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GarbageMan-Dan [2004-12-28 05:07:25 +0000 UTC]

"dont pretend the world is fine
you'll think like me soon enough
we're all doomed
you'll see..."

This lil' chunk of words were enough to slap myself with delight. Cause because its so true. and makes me happy.

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moldygrape In reply to GarbageMan-Dan [2004-12-28 05:08:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you, dearest finally, someone that sees as i do

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the-ultimate-irony [2004-12-16 04:05:39 +0000 UTC]

I like it... it's way too relevant to me right now. *touched*

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Soul-Of-Fire [2004-12-05 21:18:20 +0000 UTC]

This just bleeds of emotion, man. I love it.
LAFF YOU!!!
Keep it real.
~Sha~

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PrettyPoetess2006 [2004-12-03 11:12:08 +0000 UTC]

I like it....it's cool...interesting...a little scary but in a good way....good job!

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MoonlitShadow [2004-11-27 16:26:38 +0000 UTC]

this is very good, but i dont think you need to foul it with foul language...thinga bout it...its great as is, but the words take it down.

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FlawedSilhouette [2004-11-27 07:35:00 +0000 UTC]

I liked how you showed your emotion...nice piece.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2004-11-26 21:43:13 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAAAY BLOOD!

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Jack-O [2004-11-26 17:32:54 +0000 UTC]

"i'm a little of everyong dying." my favorite line. awesome

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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-11-26 17:36:07 +0000 UTC]

thankies ^^

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Jack-O In reply to moldygrape [2004-11-26 17:37:53 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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Rowena-afar [2004-11-26 17:16:15 +0000 UTC]

I really like this...I can hear the music in my head I feel that way alot....you did a fab job cheers :hug;

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moldygrape In reply to Rowena-afar [2004-11-26 17:32:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you, dear

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Rowena-afar In reply to moldygrape [2004-11-26 17:46:34 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome

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mutexvoice [2004-11-26 06:57:41 +0000 UTC]

interesting....as usual, very interesting....the anger in everyone an bring out some pretty interesting emotions...
interesting emotions of hate, love, agony, pain, humor, laughter...and all that jazz.

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moldygrape In reply to mutexvoice [2004-11-26 07:13:01 +0000 UTC]

Oo

how very deep that was...

gracias for the comment, mi amiga ^^

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