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moldygrape — Look Deeper
Published: 2004-12-18 21:13:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 144; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 14
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i've felt the fist of angeri've felt the tear of pain
i've held my heart in my hands
and watched it fade away
i've tasted sour lies
i've tasted loves first kiss
i've paused to watch you walk away
and leave me lost in bliss
i've spoken words of redemption
i've spoken the disturbing truth
not even you can save me now
'cause i am the untouchable youth
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WHOOO I'm poking you! 
Awesome poem, by the way
Keep it real.
~Sha~
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Somehow... It made my heart beat faster. Cuase its very delish words. Like a fine platter of the best words served by the best people at the best location. The best people being you. Considering you wrote it.
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i really like this, esp the first stanza...great wrk, sry it took me so long to comment, i've been away.
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ITS OKAY I LOVE YOU!!
ummm......
..................yeah..^^
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I LOVE YOU TOOOO some how
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lol OH MAN HE HE HE ..................
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O.o
...*dot dot dot*
hello, my name is Sarah and i have a fear of being alone
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. . . hi my name is jeff and i have had only 1 girl friend and that only lasted for 29 weeks and i was 14
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oh cute!!
i've had 2 boyfriends....both lasted for like...a month...
my bf now is awesome, even tho he lives far away from mehs
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damn im sorry to hear hes not there to hold you....
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yeah.........
gets me depressive a lot *sulks*
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wow....you have such a way with words. fantastic job
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the wisdom is much appreciated 
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Oh, it's baffling isn't it?
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IT SAYS UNTOUCHABLE
SO DONT TOUCH, YOU IDIOT...
>.<
*slap*
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