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moldygrape — Love Itself
Published: 2005-01-09 09:31:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 58; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description Battle of wits and stamina
a sexual strain of justified pain
physical mind molestation
chained back 'till the time arrives
you trip then you fall
for days you will crawl
and perhaps someday it'll end
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Comments: 9

CherrioRocker [2005-01-29 00:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Whoa... awesome. ^_^ I really REALLY LOVE THAT.... ^-^

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PinkHairPrincess [2005-01-11 01:59:56 +0000 UTC]

ok i ment 2 not @

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PinkHairPrincess [2005-01-11 01:59:28 +0000 UTC]

YAY LOVE i love
MUCH LOVE @ U MY FREDDY

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MoonlitShadow [2005-01-10 23:57:37 +0000 UTC]

take the first three lines and run with them. theyfreaking rock!

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-09 19:45:15 +0000 UTC]

First three lines fucking rule.

Put them in a different poem, seriously.
Take those ones out and write something better.
You can.

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Difarious [2005-01-09 15:22:46 +0000 UTC]

...I've never had a bad relationship, so my heart doesnt' feel too much about this poem...but its koo anyway

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moldygrape In reply to Difarious [2005-01-09 18:35:01 +0000 UTC]

ah well...thanks for taking the time to read it

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makennasboyjeff [2005-01-09 14:14:37 +0000 UTC]

.......so true..

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mutexvoice [2005-01-09 09:57:18 +0000 UTC]

interesting short piece.

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