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Published: 2004-12-22 17:10:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 60; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 10
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I open the door,there lies an eternity.
A voice calling from the distance,
Whose this voice?
Someone strokes my hair,
Who are you?
Am I shaking?
Arms reach out,
Hold me tight,
Never let go.
Watch over me,
And never let me go.
The darkness devours me,
Don't go away.
This is my shameful desire,
to a heart breaking need.
To press your lips,
Against the wound.
Whisper in my ear,
To numb the pain away.
Everywhere I go I see your face,
You stain the face of others,
theyβre masked so I wonβt see the reality.
To every question this is my answer,
Free from the pain,
Free from the existence.
As I close my eyes,
There lies an eternity.
Over the distance,
Hearing a calling....
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Comments: 19
That's fuckin' awesome...
Give them a big hug for me, 'cause they rock
Keep it real.
~Sha~
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tis good, could use some work to make the flow improve, but the idea and the structure are really great.
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if it is possible send youre friend this....
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oh believe me, i've tried
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well try harder d word it
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....it allmost made me cry for real...i put it to my situation
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awww 
do what i do, and drink it away
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it was hard to hold it in but i wont...
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your friend did a wonderful job....very lyrical and great images. please introduce he/she to DA
I would glady watch
Happy Christmas dear one
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ahh, he is on DA----------> ~ GothicDisaster (i think his username is)
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a friend?!? c'mon ur supposed to say my bf wrote this a while ago, not a friend of mine even though thats what i am, kinda in a way, but w/e its all good^^ i still love u anyways wether u change ur name or not, illstill love u all the more^^ <3333
~JuLiAn~
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well isnt it obvious you're mine?
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that's a nice poem. I like it too. 
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"As I close my eyes,
There lies an eternity.
Over the distance,
Hearing a calling.... "
good.
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