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Published: 2004-10-09 00:52:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description another rain day
another problem thrown her way
i'm better off alone, she said
i'll sleep alone in my bed again
no one to hold me
wish me goodnight
no one to say i love you too
alone i'll sleep
silence swallowing me...
i'm better off alone

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one more
tear to shed again
one more
drop of blood to taste
another life of mine
wasted as i clean the bloodied mess you made
leave me here to die

and as she drank her fill
her mind began to spin
her vision blurred
senses sure to fail
andas she hit the floor
she was sure
her life had come to an end
another rainy day

[chorus]

she drags her feet
understandably so
wearing her leather jacket
selling her soul to the devil
on the street corner
she sings a lullaby to herself
until the morning comes
she watches the rain fall softly
wishing she were dead again

[chorus]

another dark and rainy day

[chorus]
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Comments: 21

FlawedSilhouette [2004-10-15 17:12:07 +0000 UTC]

Sweetness. Awesome work, moldy.

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MoonlitShadow [2004-10-13 14:24:30 +0000 UTC]

that so doesnt suck balls today, that is very nice. i love it, it reminds me of styles that i like, nice work.

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the-ultimate-irony [2004-10-13 02:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Hm, I really don't know... I'm not all too lucid today... :-P

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Soul-Of-Fire [2004-10-12 20:45:25 +0000 UTC]

This does not suck balls. And I refuse to eat your bloody tampon
I really like the rhythm in this one. Seemed really catchy or something. I dunno, too tired to make sense of things.
Keep it real.
~Sha~

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the-ultimate-irony In reply to Soul-Of-Fire [2004-10-13 02:42:08 +0000 UTC]

Yo. I know you don't know me. And I really don't know you. But we both know Kelli. So that works.
I liked it. It's better than mine. Yes. I'm not feeling all too literate at the moment... (roleplaying slang), so I'll leave it at that. You have my approval.

My name is Lisa, and I approve this message.

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Soul-Of-Fire In reply to the-ultimate-irony [2004-10-13 02:48:26 +0000 UTC]

Um...this really confused me. I'm thinking that you meant to leave this message on Sarah's submission and not as a response to my comment. But I could be wrong, so I don't know
Keep it real.
~Sha~

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punkgoddess [2004-10-10 18:28:23 +0000 UTC]

fred..i love it

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PinkHairPrincess [2004-10-10 16:34:27 +0000 UTC]

that is my fred the god of sexieness and such a wonderful gift with words

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Jack-O [2004-10-10 14:15:37 +0000 UTC]

this is really good. a little.....depressing...but not bad at all, my dear moldy.

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dutchshun [2004-10-10 11:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Amazing when one starts to read how so many of us suffer the rainy days!
Excellent poem this.

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RedKarma [2004-10-10 05:54:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I have been reading so great lyrics and poetry tonight. This is so great!

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rntrnt [2004-10-09 08:32:43 +0000 UTC]

if you dont like it, eat my bloody tampon.

oh

my

god.

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moldygrape In reply to rntrnt [2004-10-09 16:17:22 +0000 UTC]

oh

ur

god

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rntrnt In reply to moldygrape [2004-10-09 22:21:24 +0000 UTC]



you dont like me

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mutexvoice [2004-10-09 04:58:51 +0000 UTC]

Oo...wow. that's...

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mutexvoice In reply to mutexvoice [2004-10-09 05:41:33 +0000 UTC]

good is the term really. ^^ I was speechless. wah ha!

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moldygrape In reply to mutexvoice [2004-10-09 05:34:34 +0000 UTC]

...bad?

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blackpurity [2004-10-09 04:38:25 +0000 UTC]

I just made a melody to it.. enjoyed it. So it doesn't suck bahls.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2004-10-09 02:36:39 +0000 UTC]

I like the bloodied mess line. Nice.

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berryblistex [2004-10-09 01:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow nice.. Ur a truly good writer .


BerRy.

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moldygrape In reply to berryblistex [2004-10-09 05:35:39 +0000 UTC]

thankies!

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