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Published: 2005-01-11 06:02:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 210; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description slowly dreaming
softly drifting
take these steps beyond mankind
touch the breath
of life before you
watch the heatbeat come alive

[chorus:]
feel me now
(i think that) i might break
grenade in hand
(forever close) i will stay

cant you hear them?
quickly stirring
freeze the time, it never fades
earthly drifters
bow before me
say a prayer as i take haste

[chorus]

one more saint gone
she's still bleeding
heaven knows she's on her way
soaring upward
i can see her
never fear we'll lead the way

[chorus]

sing to me
a lullaby

[chorus]
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Comments: 29

bisteca [2005-03-30 01:02:13 +0000 UTC]

Baeutiful words and beautiful face.

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moldygrape In reply to bisteca [2005-03-30 01:14:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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CherrioRocker [2005-01-29 00:43:29 +0000 UTC]

That's beautiful Fredness ^-^ I love it.

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urlilpixie [2005-01-14 04:10:41 +0000 UTC]

I like it...

btw, sorry I haven't been commenting...going through and reading now though

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the-weird-one13 [2005-01-12 17:16:02 +0000 UTC]

wicked song! me like!

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mutexvoice [2005-01-12 01:01:03 +0000 UTC]

ohh..pretty...sounds like war +

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-12 00:29:29 +0000 UTC]

I really want to record the vocals I just screamed for this.

Sounds like a damn Bleeding Through song. Fuckin' rockin'.

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moldygrape In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-12 01:44:41 +0000 UTC]

i was TOTALLY listening to bleeding through as i was writing this...

*orgasm in my pants*

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to moldygrape [2005-01-12 01:48:30 +0000 UTC]

The influence is blatant, but not disrespectful.

I seriously wish you could hear what I did to the song. Sound so cool. *proud of himself...and you*

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moldygrape In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-12 01:51:13 +0000 UTC]

record it and send it to meee!! i really wanna hear...

thank you again, precious

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to moldygrape [2005-01-12 01:52:22 +0000 UTC]

I don't have a microphone...

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moldygrape In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-12 01:55:25 +0000 UTC]

RAHHHH!!

the world has ended *sulks*

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to moldygrape [2005-01-12 01:56:56 +0000 UTC]

I know. *pooooooooooouts*

My sister is hella yelling at me, because I keep rockin' out.

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moldygrape In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-12 01:59:34 +0000 UTC]

"hella".

god i wish i could hear it

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to moldygrape [2005-01-12 02:00:10 +0000 UTC]

You makin' fun of me because I talk like a Californian?

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makennasboyjeff [2005-01-11 21:01:38 +0000 UTC]

your the greatest sarah

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MoonlitShadow [2005-01-11 20:39:56 +0000 UTC]

that really works, great song. it not only makes sense, but flows flawlessly. good job!

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PinkHairPrincess [2005-01-11 17:15:10 +0000 UTC]

woot woot i love it... our first band practise is today

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punkgoddess [2005-01-11 15:43:34 +0000 UTC]

HEY THAT'S ME...... ^^
i love it...shwooo

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Fokkar [2005-01-11 06:47:21 +0000 UTC]

wow... it's weird cause I can hear it sung in my head. Awesome rhythm, has such a nice flow to it. I don't know what else I can say about it... it's extremely well done. All the clever imagery... so intense. I read it over a couple times, and I have a suggestion for the title... but of course it may only suit my interpretation of the song, I could be totally off. How about "timeline"... it might be a little too clichΓ©... but for some reason it just came to me. Anyway, congrats on a wicked poem, you're definitely getting a fav.

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moldygrape In reply to Fokkar [2005-01-11 15:35:37 +0000 UTC]

wow, thanks....thats probably the best comment i've ever gotten. i'm most definately watching you

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Fokkar In reply to moldygrape [2005-01-11 22:50:01 +0000 UTC]

why thankyou ... so what'd you think about the title suggestion? Did I miss the mark or somewhat get the right idea? Also... do you have music in mind, or music done for the song? I'd love to hear it produced. And thanks for the watch

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moldygrape In reply to Fokkar [2005-01-11 23:45:54 +0000 UTC]

the title was very good, dear. eventually i'll stop being so very lazy and actually change the title i have now
as for music...i have vocals, but not instrumental. hopefully my "band" and i will get all our shit together and make some music XD

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Fokkar In reply to moldygrape [2005-01-12 00:24:38 +0000 UTC]

that's awesome! what genre of music will it be/ does your band play?

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moldygrape In reply to Fokkar [2005-01-12 01:43:50 +0000 UTC]

i listen to hardcore rock...metal...like Bleeding Through and whatnot...

my band doesn't even have instuments yet

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Fokkar In reply to moldygrape [2005-01-12 02:42:14 +0000 UTC]

lol that's awesome... you might want to get on that . maybe not metal... go punk! yay for punk

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coin-in-grey [2005-01-11 06:05:11 +0000 UTC]

*clapclap*

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moldygrape In reply to coin-in-grey [2005-01-11 06:06:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you, dear :hear: lol

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coin-in-grey In reply to moldygrape [2005-01-11 06:07:28 +0000 UTC]

XD yw

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