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I made this by using flares i think in Adobe Photoshop then just played with it..Related content
Comments: 9
diamondie [2004-08-30 14:11:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm from ~critiqueme .
There's something cool about this piece, it looks electric and very computerized. But I have to say that it does indeed look like you just played with filters for fun, instead of having a vision and trying to realize it. It also looks very texture-like, there is no real point of focus in the pattern. The frame is nice, but I don't like the typography at all, the font isn't very good and the effect you applied to it makes it look cheap, IMO.
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monggiton In reply to diamondie [2004-08-30 14:42:38 +0000 UTC]
woah!! cooool! thanks for dropping by....
you think so? maybe ill edit it later... ill send you a note to take a look at it again...
again, thank you for giving me a critique..
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diamondie In reply to monggiton [2004-08-30 17:25:24 +0000 UTC]
I have to say it doesn't look much better. The font is too decorative and the effect is unnecessary. The picture is so eye-catching that the text shouldn't compete with it, a simple font with white color would probably be the best choice.
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monggiton In reply to kasag [2004-08-25 18:07:48 +0000 UTC]
thanks!! your works are much cooler than mine!! hope i can make something like that.. heheheheh! thanks anyway!!
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monggiton In reply to rikarika [2004-08-25 18:03:34 +0000 UTC]
thank you!! i thought it will not be nice if i put a border to it.. astig tlga pag black nd blue combo! aheheheheh!
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