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Monnarcha — [MLP with dialogue] ...What?
Published: 2017-06-11 09:35:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 13242; Favourites: 345; Downloads: 45
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RD: Gosh, you're so clumsy!S: Tell me something I don't know. *laughs a bit* The rest of the team wouldn't stop mocking me about it. Well, especially Fleetfoot.
RD: Don't forget about me! *smirks* It was kinda hilarious after we got to know you are ok, you know? *chuckles*
S: That means a lot coming from you, CRASH~ *smirks as well*
RD: Oh, hush you! *puts tongue out* Why did you even fall in first place? Your performance seemed just fine and with no problems before you fell. *pulls bandages a bit too hardly*
S: Ouch!... Hehe, I wish I knew. *scratches back of the head* Bad luck, probably?
RD: *chuckles* You're just lucky it wasn't way too high for you to get seriously hurt. Stop moving though or I will never get this done. *looks down, focusing on bandages*
S: Alright! *puts hoof back then stops moving* Also... Rainbow?
RD: Yeah?
S: I was wondering... Since training is over for today and.. once we are done with fixing my bandages... Maybe we could... You know, I mean.. if you want to...-
RD: Maybe we could what...?
S: *gulp* Maybe we could... go out? ... again, if you want to! *adds quickly*
RD: *looks up, surprised and blushing a bit* ...What?
S: You know... a date? You and me? *grins nervously, blushing*
RD: *blinks for few times, turning reder but says nothing*
S: Ah, nevermind! That was probably bad id-
RD: S-sure! ... I mean.. why not.. I-it's not like have anything better to do anyway! *says quickly before Soarin could finish sentence*
S: Oh..? OH! Gre-... I mean, c-cool.. yeah...!
RD *gets back into fixing Soarin's bandages* ..... Let me just... finish this..
S: Okay! .... also, sorry for making this akward.
RD: Oh, nonono! It's fine! Really! *looks up and smiles a bit*
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Just got this idea and... Damn! I was looking in my gallery a bit and last time I wrote dialogue (if we don't count in comic or really short ones) then last time I wrote one was about a year ago XD Must be pretty awkward for poor Soarin to ask his teammate/friend for a date tho, especially somepony like Dash. They have been crushing on each other for a while but none of those dorks would admit it but Dash is of course too cool to make first move cuz the one and only Rainbow Dash doesn't do lovey dovey stuff... or does she? >w>
P.S.: If there are any grammar mistakes, pardon me, english is not my main language and don't be afraid to let me know!
And if it's not good enough, I am not writer so deal with it XD
Anyway, hope ya like it!
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- img05.deviantart.net/ea76/i/20…
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Comments: 49
Cute! I like the way you drew Rainbow Dash. Her hair looks nice and breezy--and you captured the bashful/awkward expressions very well--very nice
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Thank you so much, really glad ya think so ^^
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Aww!! so cute!!
By the way, what's your favorite ship?
Curiosity gets the best of me.
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Thanks! Well, I have tons of ships but when I would judge by the ones I like to draw the most at the moment then SoarinDash right now.
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guess that Soarin is the most clumsiest wonderbolt, and actually... I have a friend and spoilers that EP19 is all about SoarinDash!! but i don't want to spoil it XD
By the way, AWESOME!
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I'm sorry, but can you tell me where you got this info from? Episode 19 as I hear is going to be about the Friendship Journal being published. How does Soarin have to do anything with that?
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Well, if that's true then that was spoiler already xP Eh, I guess I would found out before episode anyway.
Thanks tho.
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WHY DOES THIS SHIP HAVE TO BEEN SO CUTE FOR ME TO DIE EVERYTIME?!?!?!?!? *Falls to the floor and dies from cuteness* also Nice art. I love Rainbow's Face. It is funny and cute
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Hah thanks, glad ya think so!
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Absolutely sweet!
Though it's kind of funny seeing both of them nervous about the date. ^^
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Thank ya!
Well, I can imagine them being good friends before they started dating so I can as well imagine then being nervous cuz of that and all XD
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Gosh, this is so cute ^^ just kiss already dammit
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Thank ya! I am really glad ya think so :3
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So cute! I Wanna see more of these two in the show. Even if they don't ship them.
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Awwwwwwww I touched my heart after reading this. You're very good at art and writing. Better than me. XDD
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Glad to hear that! Also... art? Well, thank you! But writting? Eeeeh, not really XD Dialogues are fine to write but I am not really much good at writting in paragraphs XD
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Oh, I am. People say I'm great but I believe that I am terrible.
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I think you are pretty good. At least way better than me at paragraph writting XD
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: When we 2 will have some fun&
: I ready
: BUCK
(not ask me why I do this :"D! )
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Haha silly waifu XD maybe later ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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You should be a storywriter xDDD
Amazing art,btw x3
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Hah, I don't think so. Dialogues are ok to write but actual stories?
I can't even manage to finish anything and I can't write in paragraphs a much XD
Thank you tho!
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You should and i could go over grammar
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Oh, grammar is not the problem. I have friend who could fix grammar or asking someone isn't problem but I really can't write stories in paragraphs. And everytime I try to start something, I am not able to finish it. Either no ideas or no motivation.
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