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Published: 2012-05-13 10:51:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1127; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 10
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Sammy paced.This had never happened before. And tonight, of all nights! He glanced at the clock, grimaced, and paced some more. Where was he?
Behind the curtain, he heard the chatter of the crowd, the beat of the music.
Marv the Magnificent, the "compere extraordinaire", strode up to Sammy and gave him a questioning look. Sammy answered with a shrug. Marv looked at his watch, wiped his brow, sipped from a tin hip-flask.
"It's now or never, Sam. Do or die. I believe you can do this on your own - but he'll be here yet."
Seeing the fear in his star attraction's eyes, Marv put a hand on Sammy's shoulder. "He'll be here yet", he repeated.
Sammy nodded.
Marv swept out onto the stage. The lights - those oh-so-important lights - flared and blazed. The audience roared. Marv did his thing. Sammy listened nervously, jealously. Marv could perform alone; but he couldn't.
Sammy glanced around once more. He walked in front of a spotlight. Nothing. He swept his majestic cape. Nothing. Marv's voice filtered through from the stage - only Sammy would have noticed the undertone of fear in it.
"... my pleasure to announce, the greatest - and I mean this - the GREATEST shadow puppeteer on the circuit right now..."
It wasn't going to happen. He was alone - his partner wasn't going to make it on time. It was inconceivable. Impossible.
Embarrassing.
"Sammy the Sillhouette!"
With one final look around, Sammy drew himself up to his full height and strode out onto the stage.
The audience clapped, they cheered - and quietened. A tremor swept through them: a flicker of doubt, a murmur of uncertainty. The silence grew in volume - cheers gave way to whispers. There was Sammy, standing proudly on the stage.
"But..." people asked one another.
"But..." they whispered amongst themselves.
"But..." the audience cried, "where's his shadow?"
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Comments: 66
monstroooo In reply to Sammur-amat [2013-05-06 10:37:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Did I congratulate you on your DD? I don't even know what I have and haven't done any more
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Sammur-amat In reply to monstroooo [2013-05-08 17:34:25 +0000 UTC]
I think you did, maybe? Ahahaha, I am quite the forgetful creature myself, but truly, thank you, dear friend!
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monstroooo In reply to Sammur-amat [2013-05-10 07:25:03 +0000 UTC]
Now I need to say congrats AGAIN on your DLD!
Guess all that hard work is paying off!
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Sammur-amat In reply to monstroooo [2013-05-19 21:46:28 +0000 UTC]
It's like I won a lottery ticket all of sudden!
Thank you so so very much, darling soul!
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Sammur-amat In reply to Sammur-amat [2013-05-19 21:47:44 +0000 UTC]
Let me correct that,
It's like I nabbed a winning lottery ticket or something
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DailyLitDeviations [2013-05-05 04:37:07 +0000 UTC]
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monstroooo In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2013-05-05 08:35:56 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful, thank you!
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xlntwtch In reply to monstroooo [2013-05-05 23:02:30 +0000 UTC]
Double you're-welcome, Joe.
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LightOverpowers58 [2012-12-02 19:37:39 +0000 UTC]
Suspense revolves around this particular story, anxiety weaving throughout the words...yet, the ending brings a tinge of hilarity into the story from the readers' perspective and shock from the audience's. A clip on the topic of the location of Sammy's shadow would be much appreciated and loved...but this piece is magnificent!
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winterkate [2012-08-14 22:33:36 +0000 UTC]
Wow. You really are incredibly talented with coming up with original concepts. At first I didn't get where this was going and was disappointed that we were not given a glimpse of the compere extraordinaire's act, but when the spotlight turned to Sammy's show...well, I just have to say that this was fantastic. 10/10
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monstroooo In reply to winterkate [2012-08-15 07:44:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I just got lucky with this one, the idea popped into my head out of the blue Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts, I really appreciate it
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winterkate In reply to monstroooo [2012-08-15 17:50:14 +0000 UTC]
You're really welcome Glad to do so.
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monstroooo In reply to enigmaticsmile [2012-07-31 06:49:18 +0000 UTC]
Pleasant surprise, thanks very much!
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xlntwtch [2012-05-17 12:33:28 +0000 UTC]
This is really good. Tension, suspense, dialogue, characterization, denouement -at "full height"!
Thank you.
(Saw typos. You'll see em when you're ready.)
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monstroooo In reply to xlntwtch [2012-05-17 16:18:55 +0000 UTC]
Damn, I was sure I'd de-typo'd it
I shall have to give it a thorough comb-over this evening.
In any case, thank you for such a lovely comment
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juniorel [2012-05-16 05:46:00 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE this. I particularly love that ending. The repetition and rhythm of it is just superb.
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monstroooo In reply to juniorel [2012-05-16 11:32:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
I wasn't all that sure about the execution of the ending, so I really appreciate that
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LookingGlassInk [2012-05-15 15:23:36 +0000 UTC]
Excellent work. A lot of fun to read and a very enjoyable concept for a twenty-minute piece.
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monstroooo In reply to LookingGlassInk [2012-05-15 16:47:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
I hope you can come join the fun next time - the next event will be at a more American-centric time
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LookingGlassInk In reply to monstroooo [2012-05-15 18:17:55 +0000 UTC]
I look forward to the June edition and I'm hoping to be able to get more involved in the group activities like this. You guys have all been so great and I'm really looking forward to the chance to work with everyone more in the future.
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monstroooo In reply to LookingGlassInk [2012-05-15 21:40:29 +0000 UTC]
We look forward to seeing you!
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0hgravity [2012-05-15 04:10:35 +0000 UTC]
ah nice twist ending! A fun read and well written in such little time. You should have named Sammy Peter
I wish I could have made it to the write off but alas I was taking a 5 hour practice exam
next time!
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juniorel In reply to 0hgravity [2012-05-16 05:47:02 +0000 UTC]
Peter. Most definitely. The boy who lost his shadow.
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monstroooo In reply to 0hgravity [2012-05-15 11:12:59 +0000 UTC]
As in Peter the Puppeteer?
A 5 hour exam? Holy moly, that sound hellish
Thanks
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0hgravity In reply to monstroooo [2012-05-15 14:49:16 +0000 UTC]
haha come on.
hellish indeed
welcome
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RiFlight [2012-05-14 06:00:35 +0000 UTC]
I like twist endings. They're like finding money on the sidewalk or something, LOL!
I'm sorry to hear that the turn-out wasn't what you hoped for the write-off. Maybe next month I'll join in, provided I can get my lazy ass out of bed early enough. It seems intimidating to write with a time limit. I take so long to produce anything. I might embarrass myself. Again! LOL.
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monstroooo In reply to RiFlight [2012-05-14 06:52:54 +0000 UTC]
Ah these things happen. I'll pitch the next one at a more America-friendly time, that'll make a big difference I think!
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RiFlight In reply to monstroooo [2012-05-14 16:42:59 +0000 UTC]
You know... The write off kinda sounds like "Who's Line is it Anyway." It's the contest where "everything's made up and the points don't matter."
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monstroooo In reply to RiFlight [2012-05-14 16:59:07 +0000 UTC]
Haha, it's not dissimilar! I guess it's slower and more wordsome, but spiritually very similar
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disrhythmic [2012-05-14 03:01:24 +0000 UTC]
That was so brilliant, and even more impressive with the time limit. Awesome ending. ^^
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solymn [2012-05-13 21:40:42 +0000 UTC]
Amazing, I love the ending! You wrote this (amazing story) in 20 minutes?!
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monstroooo In reply to solymn [2012-05-14 06:51:30 +0000 UTC]
I did! I got lucky with inspiration
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Rebeckington [2012-05-13 18:01:20 +0000 UTC]
Such a cool idea. Great stuff for a 20-min intense session!
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TheMoorMaiden [2012-05-13 16:44:29 +0000 UTC]
I like this. It's very different; I love how unusual and quirky it is. Well done for writing it in 20 minutes, that's a real skill.
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