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Close crop of Defender:moodscapes.deviantart.com/art/…
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She is HOTT! I'd LOVE to suck on her tits!
Seriously though; SEXY pic!
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Yes I'd have to agree - many thanks
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Yep Rosie's a class act - thanks
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The Rage Builds...
Dishonor has been given to her family, a debt that can only be paid in blood. The task of collecting this debt has fallen to her, as there are none left to take up this task anymore. She has been robbed of the life she should have had. Happy with the family she loved, and who loved her. The spirit of her ancestors has been awakened, and the fury builds within her blood. The lineage she has no real knowledge of will soon overtake her, as she has no true knowledge of WHO she is, only of who she thinks she is. The traditions of her family were never passed down, she only know what she is now feeling, but is alone in her ignorance of how to use this rage. She must learn how to channel it, make it take shape into the very tools in which she must use to avenger her family. But for now she must search... for any clue as to who her family was, why did this happen to them, to her.... was she meant to survive? or was she just a missed target??? Answers.... she must find them....
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Yep definitely the makings of a much longer story. I want to know more about what happened to her and her family and a story that keeps this knowledge from the reader right til the very end could be incredibly suspenseful. I'd really work on this one further if I were you - there is a great story and a fascinating character to be explored here I think. I really like the way you tease the reader here with glimpses - that's what I'd build on - the disorientation of where she is and how events transpired to bring her here.
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or her nips, which can be fatal.
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