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Published: 2011-08-26 23:49:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 829; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 21
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Here's a coloured pencil sketch commission request thing <3 forCharacter design belongs to
Art belongs to
i really hope you like it ouo
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Heh, she certainly has a distinct style to her... though it would seem from the design like her bra should zip up.
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The drawing looks nice but I want to point out a couple things that look pretty weird. I want to start out with the character's ear, it kind of looks like you didn't really know what you were doing? Instead of looking like an actual ear it ended up looking like some sort of Butterfly wing. About her shoulders, what Zeebluepiggy said was right, the shoulders are too short. The same goes for the character's arms and hands. Moving down to her chest area, the lines for the cleavage seems to extend too far.For the hips, it looks like you wanted a curvy sort of figure but it just seems big? Not so much of a curvy figure. The last thing I want to point out are her toes. One toe on the left for the right leg seems okay and then the rest look very messy, almost like you wanted it to get the image over with. For the toes in the left leg are just very sloppily done and they need a little more time spent on. I hope this doesn't sound insulting or mean. I just wanted to help you out a bit;;
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Yes, I understand. I'm still learning after all. ^^ everything that you pointed out was, without a doubt, correct. I will take this in mind for the future. Thank you for taking the time to critique my work <3 Um....did zee send you? Just out of curiosity.
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hm oh i await the payment in 3 weeks time ouob
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How much was it?
I never thought you would have done it without me paying you first but you caught me off gaurd xD
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i want to be sure that what i'm giving is satisfactory for the customer's needs ouob.
its about 400 points: a)its a pencil full body pencil sketch (300) b) its coloured (100).
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ffft qurl leave it alone XD
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no but seriously, it's something in your style that bothers me. you should learn to draw shoulders better. :<
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That was really rude of u to say, shame on u >
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Thats very mean :< MooingMage is a brilliant artist and the shoulders are perfect >_>
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But I really feel I didn't say anything too insulting about it. Perhaps it must have been the "damn short" in my sentence and I apologize for that. I'm just stating that I believe he can improve on his artwork by working on his anatomy a little more.
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I think his anatomy is fine :/ And if you want to leave negative comments,well.You shouldnt.You could have said it a bit nicer.
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Well I was rude with how I never provided any positive feedback along with what I said. So I guess his colouring style is pretty good despite how shiny it is. However his anatomy around the shoulders could use a little more improvement as it looks rather short. Overall, he did a pretty good job on it.
I didn't mean to come off so harsh, and I'm sorry about that.
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Its fine just be more nice from now on -_-;;
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aha no its perfectly fine ^^ the mistakes are evident. i'm really happy that you took time to back me up but....my art really is just....>u> thanks so much kumo. i'm actually so glad that someone really likes my art <3
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Your welcome 
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