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Published: 2010-11-06 00:12:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description OC-Swappage gift for

I'm too tired to shade this. Hope you like it anyway.

Kiki is COPYRIGHT Em-Uh-ly-chan.
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Comments: 4

GlassMouse89 [2010-11-22 00:41:55 +0000 UTC]

I agree, this needs shading. Right now, it's just a lot of green surface. Pick up a hair brush, fire up dodge and burn, and go to town (ooh, now I wanna draw a lot of hair - it's so much fun!)

There's also something about the face. The mouth is too far forward. It should be as far back as the nose root (I have no idea what it's called in English... I hope you understand).

The lineart is sketchy, too. Kind of a shame when smoother lines would have added so much to the wooshiness of the picture.

The detail of the ear is nice, though. It just needs to be bigger.

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mooncalled-whiterose In reply to GlassMouse89 [2010-11-22 04:20:03 +0000 UTC]

Eh. I'd like to fix this but I don't even care anymore.
Also, dodge and burn are for lazy-heads. =I

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Domochevsky [2010-11-06 15:07:18 +0000 UTC]

That is one small ear. This really needs shading for good effect.

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mooncalled-whiterose In reply to Domochevsky [2010-11-06 16:32:44 +0000 UTC]

I know. But this is on my Mum's computer so there isn't much I can do about it anyway.

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