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Published: 2012-09-03 04:35:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 9972; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 21
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"Dash you here?"
"Mhm.."
"Where?"
Soarin looked in all directions for the rainbow maned mare. She really couldn't be that hard to find, but yet she was nowhere in sight.
She seemed to have noticed this confusion and walked into the living room where he was standing.
He was sitting on the cloud couch, apparently had given up on finding her. The fire crackled, giving a nice, warm, and cozy feeling to her gigantic cloud home.
"Why are you here tonight?" Rainbow asked, tilting her head in curiosity.
"I just saw the most beautiful thing in the world!" Soarin exclaimed, grabbing her cyan hoof.
"That's the last thing I thought you would say." She giggled as he pulled her out of her cloud home.
The breeze was gently blowing on the two ponies who stood on Rainbow Dash's porch. The rainbow juice dripped down from various windows, landing in the large pool around the edges of her home. The splashing sound rumbled throughout their ears, the sound of rainbows splashing on rainbows. You didn't hear that often unless you came to Rainbow's house often.
"Me too." He chuckled pulling her into the dry night air.
The sun was setting, the sky the deep dark colors of a fire. It was an amazing sight, Rainbow had to admit. It was like... half of the rainbow. Which it was. But yet it looked amazing. She had never seen a sunset such as this one. She had never acually admired a sunset, yet taking more than a second to look at it.
"Wow, that is beau- pretty." She mumbled, cutting herself off from saying such a word.
Soarin chuckled and used his lightblue hoof to guide Rainbow to a comfortable cloud. The cloud was nice and puffy, like the ones Rainbow used for her afternoon naps. This one however, looked much nicer than others. Just something about it stood out.
So many things rambled through out Rainbow's mind as he did this. Why would he take her someplace 'pretty' and romantic? Why was he being so kind and gentle to her? He was usually up to challenge to to a race, or to tease her with mean and playful words. But this was.. Different.
"Dash? You alright?" Soarin asked, waving a blue hoof in front of her face, making her snap out of her thoughts.
"Yeah." She mumbled, her bright magenta eyes not meeting his strong and gentle gaze.
Rainbow and Soarin landed on the cloud, making a soft noise that sounded like *pomph*
"Soarin?" Rainbow asked after minutes of unbearable and awkward silence.
"Yeah?" He asked, looking at the beautiful mare, who was still not looking at him.
"Why did you bring me here?" Rainbow asked.
"I just thought it looked nice." He replied with a grin. This grin was unlike himself, like a whole different pony.
However, Rainbow didn't buy it. He seemed somewhat normal, but hiding something all the same.
"Yeah, it is beautiful." Rainbow mumbled, silently cursing herself for her choice of words.
Soarin chuckled, noticing her furious angry expression.
They sat silently, the sun setting slower than anything in the world. Ponies all around were kissing, a small treat for their late night date. Sure this was romantic, but Soarin couldn't possibly be considering them as.. a level more than friends? Rainbow personally wouldn't mind being more than friends with Soarin. He was sweet and kind, but she really never considered dating.
The air began to get chillier, the wind blowing more furiously then when they had first came. It was cold, but Rainbow was nervous to ask. What if he didn't mean 'that' by inviting her here. Maybe it was simply just for the view. Right?
Rainbow wrapped her hooves around him faster than she could think herself. She did this as if to say 'I'll keep you warm, if you will do the same for me'.
Soarin got the message and wrapped his wings around her slim and muscular body, pulling them closer together then they ever had been before.
Both ponies blushed furiously, Rainbow Dash looking at him for the first time since they had even sat onto the comfortable cloud.
Soarin looked at the mare he loved so much, but had never had the courage to tell her how he felt or ruin their friendship. Her rainbow mane almost glowed in the moonlight, her cheeks were almost as rosey as her beautiful magenta eyes, her cyan coat looked dark and glossy from the radiant moon's beam. She was beautiful.
During Soarin's little daydream he felt something soft hitting him. But it wasn't painful, it was more pleasant. It felt soft and sweet. He couldn't place the many feelings he was feeling into one thing. He couldn't explain what was happening, he didn't know what was happening.
He opened his emerald colored eyes seeing the mare closer to him than he thought. Her eyes were closed and facing him. But was this another dream? Was his mind playing tricks on him?
Before Soarin could place his thoughts, he found himself kissing the mare back. The kissing became more passionate, their lips not shied away from eachother. The feelings no longer a secret.
~
"Looks like the big dipper." Rainbow whispered, nuzzling Soarin softly as they gazed up at the silver twinkling stars.
"Don't forget the little dipper." He whispered, his wings still keeping her nice and toasty.
After a while there was no response, and he looked down to see the rainbow maned mare snoring peacefully. He loosened up his tight grasp on her, trying to make sleeping more comfortable for the pony. But a small nap sounded really good right now..
He rested his head on top of hers, letting his own snores escape his mouth as he whispered,
"I love you Dashie."
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Comments: 66

SOARINDASH2 [2015-07-03 23:35:57 +0000 UTC]

You should really upload this, Truth and Dare and your impersonation story on www.fimfiction.com

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MoonDash In reply to SOARINDASH2 [2015-07-06 11:54:10 +0000 UTC]

I wrote the stories a long time ago.. I'm not quite sure I should. xD

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SOARINDASH2 In reply to MoonDash [2015-07-06 17:12:05 +0000 UTC]

No p, you really should these stories of tours are awesome and I'll be the first one to read it there ;D

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ATLASTHEBRONY [2015-06-11 17:31:36 +0000 UTC]

Deep.....i wonder what happends if they wake up....in the morning.......lots of detail happening i do not want to talk about

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peggasistergrl26 [2015-04-12 00:51:54 +0000 UTC]

*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* i have read tonnes of these but this one just made my inner screaming fangirl escape!

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MoonDash In reply to peggasistergrl26 [2015-04-12 15:12:38 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks :^)

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peggasistergrl26 In reply to MoonDash [2015-04-12 16:10:26 +0000 UTC]

NP x

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hatersgonnahateforvs [2015-03-07 22:34:47 +0000 UTC]

I read this listening to "Do you want to build a snowman" from Frozen. It was awesome by the way.  

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MoonDash In reply to hatersgonnahateforvs [2015-03-08 00:11:09 +0000 UTC]

glad you liked it!
although, I'm kind of embarrassed of this. This was a fanfic from 2012. 

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hatersgonnahateforvs In reply to MoonDash [2015-03-08 01:15:35 +0000 UTC]

Why are you embarrassed? it's a awesome fanfiction. You have nothing to be embarrassed about, if you know it's awesome, then the author is awesome as well.. wait.. did that make sense?

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MoonDash In reply to hatersgonnahateforvs [2015-03-08 02:18:37 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks. The only thing is just so old, I'm sure I could do 10x better today, than I could three years ago. 

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hatersgonnahateforvs In reply to MoonDash [2015-03-10 00:37:47 +0000 UTC]

Heh, Old or New, you're writing is terrific. ^_^

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MoonDash In reply to hatersgonnahateforvs [2015-03-10 02:12:42 +0000 UTC]

aw, thanks <3

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hatersgonnahateforvs In reply to MoonDash [2015-03-11 22:19:54 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. ^ _^ 

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Blueshadow-the-pony [2014-09-15 13:04:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow really good story, better than some of the rainbow x soarin I've read. I'm trying write a sorindash fanfic myself but I have gotten stuck after the prologue. Do u think u could give any tips to a writer to be.    

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rainbowdash2099575 [2014-03-17 06:10:41 +0000 UTC]

"SO AWESOME!"
-Rainbow Dash

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MoonDash In reply to rainbowdash2099575 [2014-03-17 21:22:38 +0000 UTC]

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WildKnight215 [2014-02-25 05:29:48 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!!!!!

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MoonDash In reply to WildKnight215 [2014-02-25 13:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Thankies!

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LovingToRead [2014-02-01 14:16:58 +0000 UTC]

Love it

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MoonDash In reply to LovingToRead [2014-02-02 10:46:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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derpyhooves994 [2013-07-22 05:07:03 +0000 UTC]

Just came back to this. It is a very good fan fiction. Despite being short it was very good. Length does not make the story. I would rather read an amazing piece of work that is short than a piece of crap that was dragged out over the course of thousands of words.

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MoonDash In reply to derpyhooves994 [2013-07-22 13:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you! In my opinion it's a bit rushed.. honestly, I was a bit young when I wrote this .///.

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derpyhooves994 In reply to MoonDash [2013-08-02 17:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Maybe. But it is still a good piece of work. I have a piece like this. Its a little shorter I think and I only worked an hour on it.

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MoonDash In reply to derpyhooves994 [2013-08-02 19:42:00 +0000 UTC]

That's a good amount of time. I usually end up walking in circles telling the story in my head and almost never write it down.

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derpyhooves994 In reply to MoonDash [2013-08-04 06:46:31 +0000 UTC]

I have since started putting weeks into thinking of things. I recently uploaded one called "The Rhythm of Love" its part two of a story by the same name. I spent weeks thinking of all of my details. Finding out what my oc's personality is and how to display it properly. I put massive thought into almost anything I do.

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MoonDash In reply to derpyhooves994 [2013-08-04 12:52:58 +0000 UTC]

That's good! I've been getting more into art lately. But I kind of make my own story in my head when I'm bored with my character.

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derpyhooves994 In reply to MoonDash [2013-08-05 20:02:35 +0000 UTC]

Ah thats cool. I am actually working on another story right now. I had forgotten about it and I just found it last night. I started writing more into it and I am pleased with what I have so far. It mostly revolves around scootaloos past since I for some reason can't find many stories about it.

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MoonDash In reply to derpyhooves994 [2013-08-06 17:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Ooohs.

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derpyhooves994 In reply to MoonDash [2013-08-07 15:56:25 +0000 UTC]

I would apprectiate that when I post it if you could give it a read and tell me what you think.

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MoonDash In reply to derpyhooves994 [2013-08-07 16:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Of course, just please link me when it's done (:

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derpyhooves994 In reply to MoonDash [2013-08-10 07:16:16 +0000 UTC]

I am just getting into the past right now. It is taking a bit longer than I thought it would. I think this will actually be a decently long story. When I first started it I expected it to be just short of yours or maybe a bit farther. I think it will drag on to a lot farther than that now though.

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MoonDash In reply to derpyhooves994 [2013-08-10 13:05:02 +0000 UTC]

That's good! I tend to like longer stories better, although I find that some people can make a story that's short work. I guess I find that there's more of a plot to a longer story >~<

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derpyhooves994 In reply to MoonDash [2013-08-11 19:49:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I feel the same way. Have you ever read anything by patroison? He is an amazing writer who has the longest stories I have ever read. I think all together they match or are longer than harry potter. All of them.

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MoonDash In reply to derpyhooves994 [2013-08-12 18:09:54 +0000 UTC]

Really? Thanks for the suggestion. I'll look him up >:D

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Mlpegasista300 [2013-07-03 21:21:55 +0000 UTC]

I exploded when I read this hxhjdhdhdgfhdfhgdbdhdvdhdvdhfh THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS /)

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MoonDash In reply to Mlpegasista300 [2013-07-03 21:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Derp derp. No problem :3

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SonicRainboom11 [2013-05-15 23:53:36 +0000 UTC]

QWERTYUIOPASDFGHJKLZXCVBNM!!!!!!!!!!!!! (ME WANT MORE)

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MoonDash In reply to SonicRainboom11 [2013-05-16 00:06:31 +0000 UTC]

>.<


There's no more!

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SonicRainboom11 In reply to MoonDash [2013-07-04 19:49:53 +0000 UTC]

I know... '-'

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Unisuu [2013-02-03 22:01:30 +0000 UTC]

ALBGFJUKEHW982HGFKJDBG. AUHGBKCZUUJXBENUERAHGGVBUIK SO CUTE.

I should've read this a LONG time ago.

Oh well. ^^

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MoonDash In reply to Unisuu [2013-02-03 22:04:40 +0000 UTC]

lol, it's very old. I can't believe I though I could write back then /).-

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Unisuu In reply to MoonDash [2013-02-05 23:53:16 +0000 UTC]

I still feel bad for reading this sooner. /).(\

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MoonDash In reply to Unisuu [2013-02-06 00:58:26 +0000 UTC]

(\*.*/) Peek a Boo?

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Unisuu In reply to MoonDash [2013-02-06 01:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I'm not a baby. (\o.o/)

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MoonDash In reply to Unisuu [2013-02-06 01:21:56 +0000 UTC]

/).(\ too bad.

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Unisuu In reply to MoonDash [2013-02-06 01:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Ahh! Where did you go?!

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MoonDash In reply to Unisuu [2013-02-06 11:55:51 +0000 UTC]

(\^.^/)

HERE I AM!

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Unisuu In reply to MoonDash [2013-02-06 13:24:28 +0000 UTC]

There you are!

Now don't leave again!

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MoonDash In reply to Unisuu [2013-02-07 03:23:31 +0000 UTC]

-disappears-

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