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Published: 2008-04-25 04:48:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 4832; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 62
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Description I put the scan up...

This is the best drawing I have ever done. End of story.

Reference: my hand, and yes the eraser was actually on the paper.
Medium: #2 soft lead pencil
Time: About an hour and fifteen minutes with distractions (I was doing it during class).

I have no idea what the kanji on the sleeve says, and I probably did it wrong. I was just copying what was on my shirt.
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lelouch9-28 [2009-11-28 05:56:48 +0000 UTC]

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i really love your hand drawing hte pear. I think you have protrayed your idea verry well. The idea of this type of drawing (a drawing of a hand drawing another object) is a bit overdone, but it never fails at attracting my attention, and probably others. the4 cute drawings on the sleve really add some personality, as well as the cross-hatching. your whading is spectacular and well placed withing the hand and sleve. I would really love to see more value throughout the piece, because the effect fades out without it, but your placement of value is tremendous. teh angles of the hand are slightly off, but that does not stop one from enjoying the piece. Some of your lines are shakey, like on the pencil, where they should be extremley crisp. It is okay to use a ruler, and i suggest so. Hands care particularlly difficult to draw because of their unique shape and angles, but i just suggest some practice on it. I find that if you have an angle that is really difficult (due to foreshortening or just because it is akward) it helps to take a photo and trace what you see. By tracing it, you are getting the exact image. Of course, this would just be for the sake of practice. Overall, our piece has an enjoyable and airy feel to it, but you could do well with some practice in value, and angles.

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moonfreak In reply to lelouch9-28 [2009-11-28 17:03:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm not an artist, really, but thank you for your comments. I don't really draw.

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lelouch9-28 In reply to moonfreak [2009-11-28 20:43:47 +0000 UTC]

that's okay. i love to draqw but hardly do. i really enjoyed seeing your piece. even if you're not an artist, keep going at it:]

no problem:]

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TINKTINKTINKK [2009-08-27 22:11:21 +0000 UTC]

That is really good, nice detail... nice job

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moonfreak In reply to TINKTINKTINKK [2009-08-27 22:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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TINKTINKTINKK In reply to moonfreak [2009-08-27 22:21:47 +0000 UTC]

no problem, have you been drawing for a while?

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moonfreak In reply to TINKTINKTINKK [2009-08-27 22:52:53 +0000 UTC]

I almost never draw; I'm actually a writer. I just did this one day when I was bored and I have never been able to recreate the level of skill exhibited in it.

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TINKTINKTINKK In reply to moonfreak [2009-08-27 23:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow, well then you're really talented. You should maybe think about doing so more drawings, its worth a shot.

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moonfreak In reply to TINKTINKTINKK [2009-08-28 02:58:31 +0000 UTC]

I did some more abstract things, if you take a look in my gallery. I've tried drawing more, but I don't have the patience for it.

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TINKTINKTINKK In reply to moonfreak [2009-08-28 08:57:56 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, do they take you a while? I'm a slow drawer myself, its annoying.

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moonfreak In reply to TINKTINKTINKK [2009-08-28 17:33:35 +0000 UTC]

It takes me forever to draw, and I'm impatient and basically want it to happen fast, which is how I write.

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TINKTINKTINKK In reply to moonfreak [2009-08-28 17:34:43 +0000 UTC]

I take ages to draw too, and I am extremely impatient. I don't write, I hate english, but I wish I could draw quick.

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Vincent7995 [2009-04-12 18:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Good job capturing a difficult subject. Hands are rough. I always dived each finger into three distinct segments, like pinocchio fingers or something. lol

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moonfreak In reply to Vincent7995 [2009-04-12 18:47:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. It about the only good drawing that I have ever done XD

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buhoazul [2009-04-08 20:52:46 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing, I love it ^^

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moonfreak In reply to buhoazul [2009-04-08 21:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Gerdoo [2008-05-27 11:20:16 +0000 UTC]

nice work & funny shirt !

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Drawing-Flawlessly In reply to Gerdoo [2015-09-01 13:57:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... I don't find it funny. I suck at drawing clothes.

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Drawing-Flawlessly In reply to Gerdoo [2015-09-01 13:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.. I don't find it funny. I suck at drawing clothes.

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moonfreak In reply to Gerdoo [2008-05-27 22:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And how is the shirt funny?

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Gerdoo In reply to moonfreak [2008-06-10 08:33:16 +0000 UTC]

i dont know !its funny for the pic on it maybeeeeeee! ! ! !

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suit-of-nine [2008-04-26 04:54:08 +0000 UTC]

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moonfreak In reply to suit-of-nine [2008-04-27 01:14:04 +0000 UTC]

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Blueberryblack [2008-04-25 13:55:39 +0000 UTC]

ItΒ΄s very nice

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moonfreak In reply to Blueberryblack [2008-04-26 02:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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SpitFire19er [2008-04-25 11:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Woo. Very good, I'm impressed :Nod: And in CLASS! Rebel. I always draw in class xD.

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moonfreak In reply to SpitFire19er [2008-04-26 02:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

Lol. History is just so... boring. It's my only grade level class so it's blah. I sit there doodling (or in this case something more serious XD) and when the teacher finally gives up on getting the answer from the rest of the class she asks me. *sigh* I'd kill myself if I took honors history, though. XD

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SpitFire19er In reply to moonfreak [2008-04-26 03:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Well good thing you don't!

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moonfreak In reply to SpitFire19er [2008-04-26 04:54:16 +0000 UTC]

Lol. I exaggerate like that a lot. XD I'd probably be failing honors though, because of my inability to do homework. XD

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SpitFire19er In reply to moonfreak [2008-04-26 05:19:13 +0000 UTC]

Gasp. Tisk Tisk

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moonfreak In reply to SpitFire19er [2008-04-27 01:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Lol.

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Scarledian [2008-04-25 04:52:24 +0000 UTC]

not bad, not bad at all

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moonfreak In reply to Scarledian [2008-04-25 04:55:45 +0000 UTC]

It'll be better when I scan it.

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Scarledian In reply to moonfreak [2008-04-25 07:27:42 +0000 UTC]

maybe

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moonfreak In reply to Scarledian [2008-04-26 02:56:43 +0000 UTC]

I know it.

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Scarledian In reply to moonfreak [2008-04-26 03:33:40 +0000 UTC]

okay. whatever you say

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moonfreak In reply to Scarledian [2008-04-26 04:55:17 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Scarledian In reply to moonfreak [2008-04-26 05:55:56 +0000 UTC]

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ZeRo--TaLenT [2008-04-25 04:51:44 +0000 UTC]

I like the way it is. Maybe you can scan it to bold the shades a little bit but i don't think you need to use Photoshop to make it better. Doesn't it feel like cheating?

Sorry I'm new around here T.T

Anyway, nice work. The pencil detail is awesome.

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moonfreak In reply to ZeRo--TaLenT [2008-04-25 04:59:34 +0000 UTC]

I meant I used PS to clean up the photo, I didn't change anything about the drawing. My dA friends just wanted to see it and I can't get to a scanner until Sunday.

Thank you very much.

Oh, and welcome to deviantART!

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