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Published: 2004-10-06 23:42:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 57; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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You may not knowit's so surreal
suddenly I'm back
walking down sunny concrete streets
with shady parts where leaf shadows fall
elongated with each movement of the sun
the painted building's face smiles in the
drowsy afternoon, its colours
spinning my mind
The cars hiss by. indian print drapes tied
to one side.
There are people on thes treets, bums, vendors
smoking, smiling, joking
I just drift on past, interchanging vibes
fades away, sprinkles of the
open smiles layered in my memory
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WoundedSoul [2004-10-07 23:16:20 +0000 UTC]
I just drift on past, interchanging vibes
fades away, sprinkles of the
open smiles layered in my memory
--esp. awesome in my opinion. I really like this poem, reminds me of walking around downtown people watching. kudos
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moonjava In reply to WoundedSoul [2004-10-08 01:47:36 +0000 UTC]
thank you! people watching is excellent fun!
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