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Published: 2007-03-15 23:59:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 247; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description I love my lips and you should too.
i know you do
i wanted to baptize your cock in me
i wanted that part of you selfishly
and when i find you in my touch i feel emptier than ever before
you should fill me with that fucked up feeling
called love
sarcastically by cynics, blindly by the inexperienced
but it don't matter what you want to call it, as long as you can feel it
as long as we breathe it
and our pores are electric
I want to keep that in me like your risidual essence
your body's hope instilled in me
and its expulsion is almost insulting but you are too full of the sunlight of my emotion
to think of it that way
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Comments: 6

jurgemeister [2009-02-19 14:27:07 +0000 UTC]

haha, nothing wrong with loving your vag I rather like your poem

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TsualAlaghierz [2008-09-12 10:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Love it. Made me giggle. ^_^

~Tsual

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BlackbirdCry [2008-07-15 17:35:38 +0000 UTC]

I loved this little piece. So brutally honest! Not as fond of the title but the imagery, ("i wanted to baptize your cock in me"), is fantastic. Good write!

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MarieDeWolfe [2007-04-23 18:04:34 +0000 UTC]

Ha. I had fun reading this. And I like beat poetry. Good write!
~Marie

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moonjava In reply to MarieDeWolfe [2007-04-24 03:55:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks for reading this and commenting on it!

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moonjava In reply to MarieDeWolfe [2007-04-24 03:55:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks for reading this and commenting on it!

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