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Chibi-Melodic-Doll [2008-09-21 21:37:08 +0000 UTC]

lol cool!

though I do not get what is going on, or why that girl has those creepy eyes xD

I always look at this confused xD

But very good job! c:

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Chibi-Melodic-Doll [2008-09-16 00:17:26 +0000 UTC]

....epic.... ._.

xDD Thats cool! And a late congrats on it too! xD;

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SamanthaSawyer [2008-08-28 06:51:00 +0000 UTC]

tehe lol i was looking at this and i realized the pasition "purple" lols nova is in is the same exact position i was in when i broke my arm in not to long ago XD mathmatical!

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wolvenicecube [2008-08-27 01:33:41 +0000 UTC]

Hm.. okay, so I think they wouldn't be lit up quite that much at night, even with the moon on them. But this is kind of hard to get around (in my opinion at least), so ... just play with that, I guess. Though I do think the little shiny dots on their eyes aren't necessary. If you look at people's eyes, they don't always have those reflective dots, depending on the lighting. And where is the light on the underside of the cliff thing coming from? It seems like if there would be any light, it would be just on the outermost edge(s?). The cast shadow from it might also be darker, but I'm not sure about that. Play with it lalalala

I'll call the characters Red, White, Brown, and Purple (refers to their hair colors... except for in the case of Red it refers to her clothes ... hopefully it won't get too confusing x3)
Though this applies to all of them -- MORE WRINKLES FOR EVERYONE! that is to say, look at wrinkles in clothing and try to imitate that on your characters' clothes

Red's head is a bit skewed back too much, I think ... that is to say the part of it on our right should be more rounded out. Maybe. That one's nitpicking though, really
Her hands HER HANDS!! The fingers are rushed-looking x3 just look at your own hand. Hands are fucking tough btw. Also the arm that's extended is waaaay too noodly.. add a little bit of an elbow joint there. Even Sonic's bendy-ass arms have a bit of a joint to them most of the time. Her mid-body (especially where you see the midriff) seems a little shapeless too, and her hips seem too low, perhaps too shallow ....

White, same thing with the fingers on the hand that's showing. The back arm is thicker than the front one and her tail seems like it would have to be quite long to connect to her butt (that is to say, it doesn't quite look like it DOES connect ... but maybe that's just me)
Her pony tail really seems rather flat.. perhaps add more shading on the body of the hair itself, rather than just its edges and insides

Purple -- same thing with the hair. Also her waist and hips seem nonexistent (even though she's obviously developed enough to have boobs x3) The bottom of her left foot (the not broken side) could use more shape. Like maybe the heel would be more annunciated.

Brown's position is confusing me a bit, but this is really just a matter of opinion I think, or how you want to portray it -- I think that someone in that much pain would not be sitting up on her knees, but would rather have her butt right on the ground. It takes effort to support your body and if you're in agony, you probably will want to use as little muscle power as you need to. Her face is a bit lumpy (and are the pink things on Sonic characters' faces supposed to be like ...a snout-type thing? Or a marking or what? Because hers is rather flat? But if it's supposed to be then alsjefaslefj) Maybe have her other ear peeking over a little bit, but I'm not sure about that either. Her ears seem rather longish though. And her eyes are different sizes but I imagine that's just to add to her pained expression. The shading on her face doesn't make much sense..? Why is the bottom of her pink-face-thing so lit up? Her right boob also seems somewhat pointy ^>.>^ Call me sick-minded but things like that always stick out to me and look strange. Not too important though. The arm grabbing the other one needs a little work on the fingers (knuckles go a long way :3) The broken hand looks pretty damned broken x3 but you might want to make it more visible or have more attention drawn to it.

okay, so now the background -- if you use stamps, like the grass stamp, be careful how you shade them. However I really suggest you learn to draw your own grass as it ends up looking a lot more varied and a lot better in general. And especially with this type of grass ... it doesn't blend at all with the hill (left side of the picture). This could be fixed with more shading...but I still recommend hand-drawing it. The texture on the hill could also be a little less staticky-looking, but I'm not the one to ask about that ^>.>^

I do like the sky though. The lack of stars is strange, and I thought it might have been just .. not wanting to draw them in, but thinking about it, it seems more likely the sky in that area is just all evil and misty and fucked up. The weird little structures in the far far background are very eerie. In general, I think that part is really well-done, though I would suggest adding at least a few more stars of varying sizes blending into the mist.
The general atmosphere of the picture is pretty cool, like something you might see in an action movie (but with furries x3), with these two bad-ass people having kicked the shit out of the other ones. I must confess it doesn't seem so much "epic" as ... action-y! xD And I think Brown's traumatized expression is quite funny...

(this is #2 )

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raykaone [2008-08-21 13:56:20 +0000 UTC]

wow beautiful drawn ^_^

I put in my favourites too

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KindredSpirit44 [2008-08-10 05:49:12 +0000 UTC]

nice art

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The-Corinthian [2008-08-09 11:45:46 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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Pauli25 [2008-08-07 19:53:58 +0000 UTC]

Awsome art ^^

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B-B-girl1 [2008-08-07 19:28:33 +0000 UTC]

This looks really great Morgan! how do u do it???

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Fixs-the-bunnycat [2008-08-07 09:54:55 +0000 UTC]

awsom

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jadeenvious [2008-08-06 22:16:42 +0000 UTC]

ok i resent that. jade would never wear that dress!

lol jk awesome pic (im the person who writes with septembersnow btw)

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Soul-the-Mysterious [2008-08-06 18:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Awesome picture buddy

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DarkGallade07 [2008-08-06 17:03:37 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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KitFluf [2008-08-06 17:03:07 +0000 UTC]

ZOMGZZZ i luff it LOTSIES!!!!
GEEZ JOOR SO GOOT WIT YOUR ARTWORKZZ,Morgan!! ^___________^
D: i gotta learn to shade like that...
GREAT WORK!!! I luff all the characters in it ^-^
GRAHHHHH
Awesome.
Nuff said ;D

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