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Published: 2006-04-05 02:26:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 307; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description My reality
Is not that of wax
By Descartes reasoning

Not of knowledge on the external world
Highly unlike Stroud's denial
And Descartes lofty ideals
Created from thoughts
Not of physical matter

This reality of mine
Is not of sound reasoning
Neither of proper verification
Highly probable
But close to impossible

I need not to prove its existence
But to tell of a simple analogy
That of a photograph
Which brings back memories
But not the emotions

Unsettled by this?
You should not be
For this cannot be disproved
But neither can this be real
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Comments: 15

MeNTaLPSyCHo [2006-05-11 18:38:49 +0000 UTC]

so sphisticated

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morieldrake In reply to MeNTaLPSyCHo [2006-05-12 10:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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renaissancefreak [2006-04-21 19:58:02 +0000 UTC]

i love this! when i read the title, though, i was expecting some emo poem about how you cried every night or had your heart broken by your boyfriend... this was quite the opposite.

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morieldrake In reply to renaissancefreak [2006-04-24 09:56:46 +0000 UTC]

Umm...don't let the cute avatar fool you I'm a guy ya.... Thanks for the comment

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renaissancefreak In reply to morieldrake [2006-04-24 20:05:55 +0000 UTC]


sorry, i find it funny that i just assumed you were a girl based on the title of your poem. i crack myself up. but you have to admit, the majority of emo poems are written by girls who whine about their relationships.

but yea, your icon can be very misleading.

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morieldrake In reply to renaissancefreak [2006-04-25 01:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...I guess so that most emotional poems are written by girls whining about their relationship problems

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lil-crying-emo-kid [2006-04-05 22:07:53 +0000 UTC]

wow.
that's interesting.
thanks for writing me something

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morieldrake In reply to lil-crying-emo-kid [2006-04-07 01:52:53 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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lil-crying-emo-kid In reply to morieldrake [2006-04-08 22:13:32 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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angel90 [2006-04-05 08:17:58 +0000 UTC]

i think it's beautifully written!! >_< but whenever i look at photographs, i can only remember the memories but i cant remember emotions...

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morieldrake In reply to angel90 [2006-04-07 01:55:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you So how are your poems coming along? Hmm...maybe it is not so much about remembering the emotions...I guess it is more of re-living it...

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angel90 In reply to morieldrake [2006-04-07 13:50:53 +0000 UTC]

ya.... gomenasai but i can't come out w/ any w/ the pile of hw i'm getting... x___x i think i might die soon... =.=''

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morieldrake In reply to angel90 [2006-04-09 06:37:29 +0000 UTC]

Haha...I understand...I've been really busy these days too preparing for my exams and stuff...

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angel90 In reply to morieldrake [2006-04-09 17:18:53 +0000 UTC]

haha.. maybe i can try my best to come up w/ a poem abt how busy and tired i am... XD

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morieldrake In reply to angel90 [2006-04-10 14:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Haha...go ahead if you have the inspiration for it

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