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yumi15kl In reply to ??? [2014-11-10 17:10:44 +0000 UTC]

The ravenclod is cute. I wouldn't mind something starting with him.

Also if you want Artemis and Draco to make up have Draco have a heart to heart with Dobby. Dobby would forgive him. Because Dobby is one of the nicest characters ever. and have Artemis over hear it. Don't have her go up right after because she's going have a lot to think about and I'm sure she's going to want to talk to Cassandra about it. which would be twice as awesome if they were at a quidditch game and Cas was day dreaming about Ben. Also, for extra drama start stuff with the Ravenclaw dude with a name  

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Morloth88 In reply to yumi15kl [2014-11-10 21:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Really? cuz that be fantastic way out that would solve a whole lot of things and would be closer to the "real" story (using the word real very loosly) as that ravenclaw dude who has a name is her current love interest but I think her and draco may be too well established in this storylinw

Can't have a quiddich game as this takes place during the fourth book otherwise a pretty good idea. might have to think about that one actually

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yumi15kl In reply to Morloth88 [2014-11-11 13:49:13 +0000 UTC]

oh were on 4th book, okay. I knew we were past 3rd book because of Lupin was gone. I was just thinking quiddich because of the scarf Ben gave Cass. Just to give you a reason to keep them apart...you could use this as a reason to drive him into joining the death eaters. like with Lily and Snape (I know that's not the only reason he joined but it is one of the things that got him there). Either way she's not gonna like him being a death eater...but at the same time...if they do get back together it'll be more dramatic when it happens! Either way, I happy. It's you're story (well yours and SofiaTheHut), do what you think is best. 

Also, I willing to take that ravenclaw dude who has a name off her hands if she doesn't want him. he amuses me and is cute

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yukieternity In reply to ??? [2014-11-10 16:00:24 +0000 UTC]

I think the only way he could make it better, is to be forced into the house-elves position for a period of time, thereby seeing things from their point of view and-HOPEFULLY- seeing how wrong he was, and in doing so can somehow make it up to them and have Artemis seeing him doing this would possibly endear him to her and help start things along.

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Morloth88 In reply to yukieternity [2014-11-10 21:49:32 +0000 UTC]

That would be veeerrry complicated and hard to draw and keep somewhat in canon but thanks for teying to help much apriciated!!

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yukieternity In reply to Morloth88 [2014-11-11 07:33:49 +0000 UTC]

lol, or he could just like have a dream where he switches memories with them for a time xDD

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HoneyFHam In reply to ??? [2014-11-10 15:07:13 +0000 UTC]

hmm, if you mean, suggestions on ways to resolve this in a way that gives Draco and Artemis a Happy ending, do you mind going out of canon? I mean, if they end up together it already goes out of canon since he married someone else in the books?

if you don't mind going out of canon, you could have Draco coming across Dobby himself and listening to his side of the story, learn first hand how his actions affected him, and such. 

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Morloth88 In reply to HoneyFHam [2014-11-10 15:34:05 +0000 UTC]

I donno... I don't accept the prolog. It's just murdur to fanfictions of all kinds...
But at the smae time I can't say I was palaning a happy ending with Ari and Malfoy
I just wanted them to break up at the end of "book 4" so to speak but I wanted them to become a couple... I can't see it happening now

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HoneyFHam In reply to Morloth88 [2014-11-10 15:49:24 +0000 UTC]

hmm, well, if you want to go in the terrible direction, you could have Malfoy try to love potion her, but that's pretty much date rape and i don't see that fairing well. especially since malfoy's not evil, just a product of his culture.

has the rest of this been published elsewhere? I'm not sure if you've said so before, but I don't think i could come up with a good solution unless i get the full story. 

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Morloth88 In reply to HoneyFHam [2014-11-10 16:01:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah It's getting hard to deal with the story. And I think hed very much get murdured or close to if he tried that. be funny story but not getting to our goal

Oh well there is what has written. But the characters and story is more of a roleplaying thing

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HoneyFHam In reply to Morloth88 [2014-11-10 16:04:22 +0000 UTC]

I get like this myself, where the situation i have currently doesn't match with what i eventually want to happen. I have several situations like that happen in my Nintendo fanfiction i keep working with in my head. 

The way this all ends up going, i feel like there are only two options. Either Malfoy sees the errors of his ways, or you bite the bullets and just make their romance end. 

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nesseire In reply to ??? [2014-11-10 14:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Make him do something for a house-elf. Perhaps apollogizing to Dobby could be a good idea, or doing something for that crazy-drunk female elf that works in the kitchen

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Morloth88 In reply to nesseire [2014-11-10 21:48:38 +0000 UTC]

Maybe not bad ideas

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Thiendrah In reply to ??? [2014-11-10 14:20:40 +0000 UTC]

I can't really help on the romance except to suggest that maybe Malfoy saves a house-elf or something similar. My question is: who's the Ravenclod? He looks cute. 

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Morloth88 In reply to Thiendrah [2014-11-10 14:47:06 +0000 UTC]

Artemis as an OC is reeeealy old. over 10 years old as a creation and even if the story here online hasn't evolved much the "real" story has and that Ravenclaw is her current love intrest in the real story

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allen-mikk In reply to ??? [2014-11-10 14:20:38 +0000 UTC]

There is always the option of NOT having her forgive Draco...
at first that is.
Have him continually, in ways that actually conform to his promise of staying away from her, apologize through actions.
Make him Work for it. Eventually he might just be able to tip the Karma scale his way.

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Morloth88 In reply to allen-mikk [2014-11-10 14:49:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah That thought have crossed my mind, hat be more in caracter and worked better with the canon but I dubt the online "fans" wouldn't like that I think therefor I was thinking maybe a poll...
I think that is the most likely way to get her but there are more story issues. you think she is mad now.. just inagin when he becomes a death eater

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allen-mikk In reply to Morloth88 [2014-11-10 15:53:39 +0000 UTC]

*imagines it*
ha-
HAHAAHAHAHAHAAHA! Oh the glorious rage!


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Do whatever you feel is best for your characters, don't fall to fan pressure- I've seen far to many good stories die that way.

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