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Published: 2014-11-10 13:17:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 6992; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 18
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Malfoy is so stuck in the doghouse he will need solvent to get out of there
He is also remembering a misunderstanding regarding glasses
And Ari is referring to this hallway encounter and this library date.
I need help. Suggestions!
The more I attack this problem the more I realize I shouldn’t have been seduced by the wonderful suggestion one of my viewers (years ago now) gave me.
That suggestion was have Draco and the whole dobby incident revealed to Ari. Why did I do it?
I frankly can’t write myself out of it. How is she to forgive him “(her)…good opinion once lost is lost forever” that mulish, emotionally stunted, proud and scared female. She was basically raised by house-elves. This is a key part of her and one of the reasons she is as messed up as she is…and then there is the whole Dobby thing…. Gah! Should I do a poll or something?
Artemis is my Harry Potter OC. She is in the library where I like to think a lot of drama keeps happening.
I belive house-elves to be an enginered specie, like the dog or something. that level of submission ain't natural...
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Comments: 69
That Ravenclaw dud is gorgeous! You get him Artemis!
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This really does make me realize how much of an ass-hat someone would have to be for a House Elf to cheer about getting the boot.
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I only just realized, for a House Elf, it would be getting 'a' boot.
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Sadly so. I find the house elves a very interesting and sad thing I think JK have glossed over so not to make all of us super depressed
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Maybe he should come back?
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But you don't want him back then?
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''the wrong guy got it'' XDD That Ravenclaw character was fun XD
And I don't know how you're gonna get out of this one, it seems unfixable indeed :/ From what I understand, Malfoy would have to respect house elves because HE wants to respect them, not because Artemis respects them, right? And she would have to be convinced of that...it seems like too much trouble, but it could be done XD
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Glad you liked him
It is an awfulmess I've written myself in
here is that problem about her presonalitytoo but yes I see what you mean
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we miss his snarky pressense
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There's a couple of issues with the spelling and grammar but apart from that, this is really good as per usual!
As for the problem... I don't think it would be right for Ari to just forgive him right away, since she's way too stubborn for that. 
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I have saved this comic in raw from (FOR ONCE) and can actually fix the writng if you tell me what and where
Thanks
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Welcome!
There's only a few...
4th panel, Draco's words would be better as "I'm not bothering you. Anyone can sit at this table."
5th panel, Ari: "You gave me your word. Besides, you owe me clear avoidance seeing as you've assaulted me and ruined Cass' date."
5th panel, Ravenclod: "You assaulted her..? You should definitely leave, Malfoy."
5th panel, Draco: "I'm not doing anything. Just reading. Besides, how can I apologise if you avoid me all the time?"
6th panel, Ari: "You're not supposed to apologise, you're supposed to keep your promise!"
6th panel, Draco: "I'm sorry, Artemis. I didn't know how important house elves were to you."
8th, Ari: "No, it doesn't. House elves have been bred and reared to relish subjugation, and find worth in pleasure and servitude. You and your family have hurt this poor species to such a degree that they left you, an act considered the biggest disgrace and failure within their culture."
9th, Ari: "He works here for Freyja's sake. Man up enough to realise you've burnt this bridge. Now leave me to do my homework."
Sometimes it's just an issue with how smooth it reads. Also, the deviation title is missing a 'd' in 'bridge'. Your English is really very good though! Hope this helped!
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As sweet and as detailed as this is I can't agree with you word changes as I feel they take away some the charactaristics and feel from their sentinces. I get their might be gramatical reasons for some but I chose several of those words carefully
That said I am dyslexic, I can't see when or where you have changed a misspelling of homonym I can only see when you've gone thesorus on me 
I should never have asked for this. I feel so ungratful. I am so sorry. You did this for me and I thank you.
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Oh, no, that's okay!! Again, it's your comic so you're entitled to leave it or change it however much you want! I'm sorry, in fact, didn't know how much you wanted to change!
If you want, I can just point out some spelling issues? Just 'specie' should be 'species' in several panels, as the singular of species is still species, and 'defiantly' should be 'definitely' in the 5th panel, as defiantly is a different word completely.
So sorry if I've bothered you. Please don't feel bad!! O.O Your spelling and grammar are still ace!
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Please can you just forgive him already?
I really love them togather, it really feels real that they do love each other, but acts realistic.
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Yeah but as i wrote in the comment I don't know how to get her to forgive him. I wrote myself in to a corner with this story and I can't figure out how to do it
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I don't think he needs to cahnge himself or something like that, but I think that she can forgive him by that, that she'll understand that we are all humans, and in the end we all make mistakes. Malfoy deeply apologized to her! Since when he does that? I think she needs to remember that no one perfect and that he tries his best to show that he cares for her, although he is a jerk and idiot sometimes...
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Ive tried to keep im in character by not caliming to have done anythigng wron
the biggest poblem is hat I don't want to write my own character out of character. I have known her well for these ten years and she is also a stubborn idiot and jerk
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ammm someone that lock them in a room so she'll forgive?
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I understood that misunderstanding!! Haha I remembered the comic from when Artemis and Cassandra were mimicking Ginny and Hermione. Anyway, if Artemis doesn't want the Ravenclaw guy I'll take him, he's hot. 
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You have excelent memory then!
You are gonna claim my ravenclod? interesting
You seem to have out it very precisly, That is the issue, also that he dosn't feel like he has done anything wrong, he hasn't appologised for what he has done. not once. I don't want him to be too out of character and I don't want that for er either and... headache
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I thought the book said "How to train your Hufflepuff"
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No
to make it apear to be just as randomly a picked book as it is I decided to make it one he would never read
about Hippogryffs
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Yeah, I guess that wouldn't be his favourite subject.
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First: Who is the cutie with glasses? He's yummy.
Second: The drawing here is excellent, so intense and conducts well the tension between characters
Third: What if he stupidly put his life in danger doing something good (like saving an house-elf from fire)? Or if they got trapped together somewhere and could do nothing but talk and talk for hours, finally understanding each other?
...Yeah I'm not convinced either.
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1. He is a cameo of a guy that is Ari's love intrest in another storyline
2. THANK YOUU!!
3. sounds like more a good way to solve the problem had this story been written and not drawn
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Seems good to me 
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wise words
but we'll see ... I do like to play with fictional hearts
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Hee hee, How to Train your Hippogriff.
I really like this conflict between Draco and Ari but I can see how it's going to be hard to patch. :<
Maybe you could have Draco become more lenient towards the elves by tossing in a scenario where a house elf helps him out of a situation. Or maybe something like Draco arguing with his father about the treatment of the elves with Ari watching on, unknowingly.
Sorry, I've got no better ideas. u wu
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Yeah, I thought it would be more obvious how random and much he is not reading the book it would be if it had that title
Lucius would be hard to get to the school for no reason but thank you sooo much for trying!!
I'm in quite the pickle. I should not feed my angst-pire so muc
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The angst is the best part. :3
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That poor Hufflepuff. He got stuck with such a poor partner. I mean, Draco's like stalking her. I love the eye details. Anyway, awesome! Poles are always good, I suppose, but whatever you think~
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Ravenclaw actually but no one cares accept maybe he
Maybe I should have a poll just to see what the genral feel is
Thank you!!
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Ah. Oops. silly me~
Probably, it solves problems usually. Or makes them worse.
NP!
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I like the new guy's snark. Wonder if he'll be back. He's pretty funny.
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If you like, he would be easy to have return
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Ravenclaw dude: (as soon as Artemis begins her little speech) I'm out!
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