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Published: 2018-12-13 16:11:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 39391; Favourites: 321; Downloads: 32
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Long overdue there Eric... shudda said something earlier and now you can't shut up XD
They didn't talk, but at least he talked...?
Bonous comic for patreon that I made for funsies about Eric's take on being locked up!
Vanessa is not pleased with this night... Well, if she can't be happy....dun dun duuun!
Also I need suggestion help over at patreon ASAP!!
(This is why he ran after her incase that wasn't obvious with him looking for her to talk to her before the show and then not finding her.)
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But he how will he hear Ariel sing now???? 😱😱😱
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Ok, why do I get the feeling that for the 'Crash the Wedding' Sequence, Belle and Rapunzel are gonna personally- I mean ACCIDENTALLY beat the everliving bejesus out of Vanessa, with Aladdin whacking Nessie in the butt with a guitar, causing her to drop the phone, and expose little miss tentacle biatch?
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Oh my, this girl Is trouble, and maybe Eric will finally see it.
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haha this is great. serves him right getting locked in the closet! >XD I kind of wish king triton makes an appearance and smacks Eric. He would never approve of Eric after what ariel went through
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He wouldn't aprove of eric seeing as he is and Andersen.
His treatment of Ariel? What has Eric done to Ariel apart form not knowing she likes him and not knowing she is the true vocie?
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Oh yes! I agree whole heartedly
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Is that a bust of Walt Disney near the storage closet?
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So Ursula now is acting like Bertalda from the original undine tale!
the first Ursula and first Vanessa!
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Oh well, was the original version of the original version of the little mermaid!
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I think disney based theirs on Hans Christians version.
Is that the version he based his on?
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Yes! The disney version is based on Hans Christians version!
But Hans Christians version is based of Undine!
The disney version is a fusion of both stories! That's why the mermaid is the daugher of the sea king and got an happy ending!
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First frame:
Eric, honey, don't. I can't help but feel a little bad for our oblivious foul. He's too hard on himself... I mean yeah, he should've been clear about his lack of romantic interest in her from the beginning but he has no idea how much she's to blame for that entire situation.
second frame. I have to appreciate how much effort Nessie put in her outfit though, considering she'd been planning on bailing. Maybe she hoped to impress him enough with her looks to avoid having to deal with content?
Second frame:
Nice save Eric, nearly phrased that like a confession of love.
But really, running and talking, not easy. Stop looking so beatyful and perfect! Anyone else would be a heaving mess.
JK I love you.
Third frame:
Bad hiding place but okay...
Fourth frame:
Holly frick!!! Abort mission!!! Eric she's behind... Is that Walt?
Ps Cool shading. I don't remember you ever using that much in this comic before so it's really cool here. Props!
Fifth frame:
Eric... I love you... But how do you function? You are so lucky you have friends who support you and look out for you because I feel like you can not be allowed to let loose on the world on your own. It's a broom closet how did it take you this long to see that there is not another person inside?
Again great shading. Love the different angles we get of the full dress in this one too.
Sixth frame:
It is Walt!!!
Vanessa is out for blood. Completely in the "if i can't have him, no one can" mindset. Hope someone goes to look for Eric once they see her return without him... Please tell me he has his phone with him though. Searching a whole school may take a while. Also Eric... Starting to edge on adorably well meaning to doormat here.
Frame seven:
At least you are self aware enough to see that.
Frame eight:
You were broken up anyway though... Even if she was still listening what about that did you expect to come out of that? Maybe he's starting to feel less bad for her and start to be fed up with her attitude. Finally.
Big take away:
This one was more story driven than art driven. The shading in the last few frames stood out though. The sinister looks for Vanessa and the emptiness of the hallways came across excellent! Good job.
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1.Vanessa is that kind of person who dosn't leave home without giving her looks 100%. Also, you are forgetting her mum. Vanessa dosn't wanan perfom where as Ursula demands that of her
Eric is to blame but Vanessa is to blame more, But he dosn't know that. He only knows he has been a right ass and he really can't stand it.
2.XD Nearly...but not quite. I love him so I am trying to draw him so everyone esle loves him too.
3. Oh yes, Eric agrees, super bad hiding place. I need to ad speed lines or something. it seems people don't get how quick this interaction is suppose to be. 
4. It sure is Walt 
5. Yeah running in to a dark room and having it shut behind you in the time it takes to speak two sentances. Yeah what a moron... how could he not have figured that one out... Sigh... Do you have any suggestions has to how I am to make this seem faster? I didn't show the dark interior but I couldn't with the angle I needed for her to hide... oh well... Eric was rushing in to darkness. I tired to be havy with the shading to showcase that but i guess I could have done more?
6.It sure is walt 
That is exactly her mindset.
7. Yeah, at least there is that.
8. Sure was but he has screamed it at her now... that should nail it home.
How can I make the speed and dark clearer? I obviously need to as people just make Eric out to be an idiot for rushing in to a dark room and not noticing it is empty... I am not saying he is smart but I tried to make things look dark and empty and he look like he was running... any suggestions?
Thank you for the break down!!!
Edit: made some changes, added speedlines, added the - in the sentences while running and darkened down the comic.
Did it improve it?
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Sorry. If you put it like that it indeed doesn't seem so bad. Not really. I'm not particularly well versed in the art of comics. I don't know how you make action look fast in this medium. Gues I'm so used to him being oblivious at this point that I assume he should've seen stuff coming from miles away.
The dark of the hallway was very clear, I guess we just didn't follow the fact that you can't see much in the hallway must mean the closet is pitch black. It was indeed the angle that was working against you. Speedlines and windblown hair work for these things. Making a drawn character look out of breath seems like it might be near imposible within your format. So there isn't much more that you can do. Other than to accept that the allknowing perspective of the audience can make us forget that he doesn't see everything that we see.
It's indeed better with the additions you've made.
Saw your new page, and ow boy do I have things to say about that one. But I'll wait with writing a reaction until after my finals, and possibly a bit longer.
Until then!
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I'll wait for it with bated breath ^^
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Did you notice that her dress looks like an octopus? I thought that was a nice subtle touch.
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I did. It looks so cool. And it doesn't just look cool but wearable too. I've had times when I tried out an idea for a dress in my head and then when I looked at it it looked pretty, but not something that would work in the physical world. So that dress is a success on all fronts.
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Oh Eric, my dude. (shakes head but is giggling)
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"We are totally broken up now!" From inside a storage cupboard... big mood
I love this series so much!!!!
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Eric you poor good intentioned fool. Is that Vanessa's plan to keep him from finding out? Locking him in the janitor's closet? Perhaps he has a cell phone, dumbbell!
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drew a quicky with him lamenting his own stupidity and calling for help as an extra comic om Patreon so... YEah he has a pone
He'll be just fine. When they find him
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for some reason i read all of this in a super lame unconvincing voice xD
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Well..
But there is nothing I can do about how you read it
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Be nice to my darling!
I know, He is too foolish but so does he! and he is in a rush. He is trying to make things right. He hates that he has to break her heart!
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but the way he did it...not so smooth 8x
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No of course not! XD
How would that be entertaining for us? XD
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Som vanligt lyckas du göra så att jag drar på smilbanden! Och det är positivt menat! 
Gillar sista scenen då Eric säger att det definitivt är slut mellan dem! Tja, Vanessa bad ju faktiskt om låten i föregående serie!
Längtar till nästa serie!
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Tack, Jag tog det som något bra. Jag vill få folk att skratta, det är mitt mål i livet ^^
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LADIES AND GENTLEMAN, HERE IT IS! WHAT WE ALL HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR! FINALLY
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