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MorphiusX — Many Puns Too Far
Published: 2017-01-08 03:06:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 882; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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FeaturingDISCLAIMER: The hyperbolic scenario does not reflect the people who are featured in this comic. This is just to get your kicks on some hyperbolic humor/attitudes.
For an Additional Entry on -Current- kiashone's Christmas Giveaway
I know this may have been late on deadline, though I hope it reaches out to you, .
Set in Manehattan.
UPDATE ~ Deleted scene: Editor's tail mane snaps off from Crimson Glow's jaws, as he chases Bright Idea for her bad jokes. Unexpectedly, they crash into a taxi, & it wasn't a pretty sight.
UPDATE II: I didn't win a spot. Only 2 Winners won. Huh, & I thought there would have been more than just two, but psyche...
The following characters are properties to their respective , , , , & .
Special THX to for for one of her 3 muscle puns!
Artwork by .
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How come? Don't you think your "Anti & Uncle" would like this...?
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Gaaahhh, I didn't see that one comin' lol
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Well what can I say, they've been "breaking bad" enough!
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This is the best art style I've seen in a while good job!
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THX, though trying my hand at digital seems better, however I tend to fair better at traditional considering I don't have to re-lineart through the sketch 2 in total 1 from paper, the other in traditional.
Long story short, my digital work is better, though I fair better in traditional. If you want an example, check To Where Back Again (MAP Title Card) , maybe a one-time thing or not, but it sure helped somepony to garnish a bit more of attention...
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noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOO.
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She's my queen of puns ^^
So I'm her king 👑 ❤️
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Oh my goodness, a totally original comic featuring my punny OC! 
One piece of feedback, the order of the dialogue is a little bit confusing...the best thing to do is have it all flow from top to bottom, left to right, so if in the very first panel Kiashone is speaking first, you'd have her bubble be the top-left-most spot, followed by your answer, then my speech bubble, and your reply. As it is, you need to go back and forth between characters to see what order makes the most sense, which distracts from the story-flow.
All in all though, a really "Bright Idea", and an excellent example of your artwork. Definitely worthy of a brohoof. /)(\
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THX for the tip & you're welcome!
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XD
HOLY CRAP!
Oh this is totaly worth the puns to see this
But no I don't need a mane cut
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Hehah!
Well your snapped tail & cover up head cast would object otherwise... (Don't they cut off people's hair before casting...?)
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LOL, thank you for the short comic.
I'm sorry that you didn't win. If it was physically possible, I would make a pony for all entries. Also, the giveaway was only for 1 prize. I made it 2 however. One was random chance as promised, while the other was more or less "Best in Show". It was just one that really clicked with me, and I really wanted to make it. However, it wouldn't be fair to everyone else that entered if I did it that way, so I just made it the 2nd criteria.
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You're welcome.
Eh, I soon found out I accidentally left a building uncoloured behind me, in the superior left hand corner, so I may as well fix it whenever...
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If you ever do another comic Morphius, could I be in it?
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Hmmm, sure. Depends on where you'd fit in my To-Do list...! Speaking of which, I got tagged. Time to update.
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What did you mean by 'tagged' and 'time to update'?
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I got tagged via mention, but you'll see, once I update my journal.
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