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Published: 2009-07-25 18:43:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1386; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 31
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Yet more madness.Model: Me
Photographer: ~SamuelQ
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I will start by saying that I like the look of the model, that's you? There's potential for a very fun series in these, and it really does transmit a sense of seething madness. Good job being in front of the camera. The problem is now being behind the camera. Picture is much too dark. Even though you may want "dark" you also want highlights to bring out your subject. Your small, deadset in the center of the frame, and neitheir impose nor really get that "walls closing in on you" effect. It is hard since you obviously got someone else to take the photo, but work with them on some dramatic lighting. You have a nice theatrical vibe but you could really make this a great portrait shot with some better camera work. May I suggest solely for a little inspiration another deviantart member fond of self portraits: [link] Have fun!
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Thank you, I'll try to fix the things you pointed out, when I get to continue this subject.
And yes, I'm the model.
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Priceless facial expression and an excellent morbid atmosphere.
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lol awesome expression and lighting, and jacket of course. Why do you say you know what it's like to be locked in a mental hospital?
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Thanks!
I know how it feels because I've been locked in mental hospital twice.
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Depression, I wanted to kill myself.
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When i was depressed i just play video games, lots of it, it really helps
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I think the dim lighting is good in that it sets the mood for this photo, but I think it would've been better with one small, bright source of light. The higher contrast and deep, deep shadows would've been more effective. It also would be more eye-catching.
I like the angle, but the composition isn't very interesting. Maybe more closely cropped.
Good job at modeling. I like the expression and props.
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Thank you, I'll try out your ideas about light with next set for the series.
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oooooooooooooooooh i want one of those jackets lol
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ot must be an amazing feeling
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That is a fake straight jacket but the feeling was great!
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yeah iv seen ya can pic em up for like £60 my friend bought a tartan one lol
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