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Published: 2013-11-17 14:33:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 71; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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took me more than two hours..

i'm trying ;_:


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JoeFajita [2013-11-17 23:33:48 +0000 UTC]

>took me more than two hours.. i'm trying ;_:

I hope you're not implying that's slow.


The eyes look a bit to bright, though. And the stripes on the tie look too "strokey", too flat.

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Motion-Blue In reply to JoeFajita [2013-11-18 00:28:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh, it's probably me comparing myself to much more skilled people again.

I'd like to think that experts can do a much more solid base in less time.

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KipBaldovin [2013-11-17 19:40:00 +0000 UTC]

You got a whole lot closer to the likeness then the vast majority of the thread.

Good strokes and lots of good values.
I think (don't quote me on this.) his right (our left) eye is tilted a bit more inward on the ref, the crease at the corner of his mouth isn't large enough/defined enough, the highlights to the left of the face are a bit too bright and the end of his nose is a little too small. All around I think yours just looks like a younger version of the ref. Any other problems are simply beyond my skill/understanding.

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Motion-Blue In reply to KipBaldovin [2013-11-17 20:36:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I've been wondering wether i managed to get the likeness down or not.

But yeah, i definitely neglected those creases in his cheeks, among many other things.

Also i think the eyes are too big...

Anyways, appreciate the feedback!

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