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mouseluva — A Little Piece of Hell by-nd
Published: 2010-05-07 10:49:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 338; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 10
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Description What will you do?

You found me laying broken on the side of the road. I waited too long, and now I must wait for the beauty of your hands to allow me to erase my mistakes. You plucked me from the gutter of my mind and reconstructed me. I am yours for eternity. I will suffer for so long.

Not long enough...

I'll do whatever it takes to redeem myself. I will eat the forbidden fruit, even though I know deep inside that Adam was right. I will become the number six-hundred sixty-six scrawled in blood on the wall. I will be your wind and your sun and your Earth, or simply the dirt worn into the folds of your feet. I'll do anything... To make it up to you.

I pray to God that you do...

I am your servant, your slave, I will do your bidding and give you my all. I will change nothing or everything. I will be nothing or everything or both. I owe you forever and will suffer at your hands for as long as it takes. I'll do whatever you want me to do.

Well then I'll grant you one chance...

Thankyou Mistress. I will use this chance as if it is my last. And if eternity is not enough, if it is not enough to cease to be and become forbidden evil scrawled on walls, if it is not enough to drink the poisoned wine and fornicate with kings... If it's not enough...

Not enough...

It should bother me that I'll go as far as this, further than this, but deep inside I'm not insane I'm not insane. I don't believe in fairytales, but that's okay because this is a ghost story. No one wants to go to hell, but I am already there and you are the mortal woman on the seven-headed beast's throne. Your hatred will strip me and leave me naked, I will become the beast with ten horns, I will get rid of the pain of being a man. I'll do this. I'll do anything. I'll... Try again.

Try again...

I'll try for as long as you'll give me chances. I will try until my luck runs out and I will try beyond death. I will come back and live forever. I will be wed to the devil and we will kill forever. I will take care of the possibilities you never considered, the likes of which you never heard. I will try again. And again.

And again...

Over and over again...
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Comments: 5

daddysir [2010-09-16 14:32:28 +0000 UTC]

No song can copyright a mood. A mood that echoes in every man's thoughts at having an obsessive love. That is what this reminds me of. The obsession. And losing the love of the object of your desire. What you will do and what you will say.

This is deeply wonderfully disturbing and true.

I found you at the guild. You don't mind being a new favorite, hmm?

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mouseluva In reply to daddysir [2010-09-17 04:02:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, thanks for the favouritism (:
I guess this piece is a less... controversial interpretation of the song's mood. If you look up the video for A Little Piece of Heaven, you will see that I effectively neutered the real meaning xD
One response a friend gave me to the video was "oh god he's eating her heart. ok i'm done."
Still, awesome song

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alucard10w [2010-05-08 03:39:02 +0000 UTC]

it does the songs justice
great job

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mouseluva In reply to alucard10w [2010-05-08 05:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks (:

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alucard10w In reply to mouseluva [2010-05-08 05:22:19 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome

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