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mouseluva — Fight the Laws
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Published: 2011-07-06 19:01:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 144; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Can aeroplanes fly backwards? Negative displacement and we can take a journey to the past where chopping cones up was science and life was simple. I could die at twenty-five and begin my life at sixteen. Chemistry was equal to love, not whether the oxidation number changed. Turn back time to bowler hats and class. Turn back time to something worse, because all the masochists will die happy. Don't they deserve to be pleased sometimes?I won't be so pretentious as to call it a style, so much of a hypochondriac to call it a phobia. It's a parabola or something. Turn to page 177 and solve for x and the oxidation number of Mn in MnO4- (it's purple). Chromium ions are green, like envy and how nature will take back this complexity we've created.
I'm leaving here. I can't go home, but home will steal away to me in the heat of summer and the dead of night. I'm going to where I live, not where I belong. I'm going to hide in a hole and hibernate until it's time.
It will be time when displacement is positive and planes can leave the ground. The years will send them here, to where I am living. And then I will be home.
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I have to say, I'm kind of a 'fav and run' kind of person ever since I started work. This made me stop, made me want to comment. I can't place it, where it began. The line that triggered my attention and booted up my emotions. My breath caught short and made me concentrate.
This is well written and I love how the paragraphs get shorter. Like an anticipated end. I also respect you for putting death before beginning, it makes the reader pay more attention to the short amount of time. A life too short lived.
Also, thank you. I believe this will be something I will come back to read again and again, interpreting it differently each time.
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Wow. Thank you very much for the feedback 
Gratitude>9000
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No, it's not cocky or ungrateful. I understand because that's how I write! Even though they are simply words, and the words don't change, they will mean something different to everyone. That is literature, it is merely up to interpretation
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Haha, thank you ^^ I'm glad you can relate c: I checked out your gallery and it was pretty good
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Well, this was written in Chemistry class :b I have the test on the topic on Mon :L
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Lulz. Is good review then.
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I suppose xD I got the equivalent of a B on the test, which is okay as I just need practice with the questions for the A.
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That's not shabby at all.
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