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Published: 2011-07-01 02:24:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 260; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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It didn't start out as much. A new haircut, a slightly different style of jeans. It must have been enough to catch somebody's eye, though maybe she already did. She exited the door of the salon, running a hand through her new jet-black locks as she stepped lightly onto the street. Her trainers were anonymous in the throng and everyone kept their distance from one another- too busy to stop, somewhere to go.Nothing was strange, until someone bumped into her shoulder. She didn't hear an apology, merely "you're dreaming" whispered in her ear as they passed.
What? That's not right...
The person had faded from sight completely; she didn't see their face or their clothing. Must have been her imagination. The city thrummed with noise, vibrant with the hum of a weekday lunch-hour. The summer sun illuminated thousands of people at roadside café tables, each with their own life, thoughts, background. This is why she loved the feel of the city. She passed through it all like a ghost, letting the noise echo through her. Sometimes if she listened hard enough, the thrum sounded like it was speaking to her. She did this now, gazing intently at the ground and listening for the echo of a deeper word.
"Madeline..."
Her name was the first echo she heard. She scrunched her nose, perplexed, and listened again.
"Madeline, wake up...
You're dreaming..."
What? That's not right...
She looked around more carefully. Did the brick on that cornice usually stick out like that? How was it staying on? The faces on stone carvings leered at her from their lofty perches. Did they usually look so... alive? She stopped in the middle of the street, searching the buildings for something to rebuke her paranoia. Someone bumped into her as she stopped.
"This isn't real." She squeezed her eyes shut, trying to break through the illusion. When she opened them again, a mother with a pram stared warily at her and hurried along with the rest of the world.
It must be the heat.
She started walking again, then ducked into a back alley out of the sun. She felt the shade envelop her, smooth and comforting.
That's better.
A rubbish bin clattered behind her. She turned to see a stray cat jump up onto the fire escape and lie down in the sun. Was that a metallic glint she saw in its eye before the drowsy kitty curled up to sleep?
There was a footstep behind her. A strong-smelling cloth was pressed over her nose and mouth before she had the chance to turn. A strong arm wrapped around her waist, pinning her arms to her side as she tensed.
Don't breathe. Just don't breathe.
"You're dreaming, love," a male voice purred. "You're dreaming. You need to wake up." Her chest was starting to ache. She tried to shake her head away from his hand.
"No. You have to wake up." His grip tightened and he pressed the cloth harder against her face. The arm around her waist squeezed suddenly, forcing the air out of her lungs in one swift movement. She coughed and gasped involuntarily, her knees weakening. He held her up, the cloth still obstructing her breathing.
"That's it. Now sleep. Sleep and you'll wake up."
So she did.
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Comments: 20
mouseluva In reply to Niteshifter [2011-07-04 05:02:14 +0000 UTC]
I've never seen the former (PLEASE DON'T LOOK AT ME WITH THOSE DISAPPOINT EYES. ;A; ) Ties into my whole The Organisation thing I have going on c:
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Niteshifter In reply to mouseluva [2011-07-04 17:25:04 +0000 UTC]
Dx AAAAAARGH!!! you haven't seen the Matrix?! omg you deprived child!
and I like it :3
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TinzTheCan [2011-07-01 02:33:23 +0000 UTC]
Nice.. Idk what to say. It's really good. (: I thought of Inception instantly or one of the meme's on memebase when I got further into the story and the person that passed her and whispered in her ear that she is dreaming. (Y) I was actually able to visualize pretty much every detail as if it were real.
Good job. c:
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mouseluva In reply to TinzTheCan [2011-07-01 02:34:30 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I did take a little inspiration from that xD Thank you c:
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mouseluva In reply to bookwormanjel [2011-07-01 02:28:28 +0000 UTC]
Bwahahaha. I know what happens next. Dunno if I have enough substance to write it though. I mean, Lillith's been strapped to a hospital trolley for two years because of that xD
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mouseluva In reply to bookwormanjel [2011-07-01 02:37:03 +0000 UTC]
I can't find the inspiration to finish the story! :c I sort of know what happens, but can't seem to find the kick.
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Tanashai In reply to mouseluva [2011-07-01 03:02:31 +0000 UTC]
*KICK!* There's your kick; now do more!
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mouseluva In reply to Tanashai [2011-07-01 03:05:26 +0000 UTC]
;A;
Do you have any idea how awkward it is to approach a character who has been in humiliating captivity for two years?
"Where the hell have you been?"
"Oh, you know. School. Hey, I invented a couple of new characters! Oh, but a couple of them died. I guess I have a bad habit of that. Want to meet the survivors when I get you out of here? c:"
"..."
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Tanashai In reply to mouseluva [2011-07-01 03:15:00 +0000 UTC]
Oh come on, you can do it! ^^. Make the humiliating capitivity be in flashbacks in the meat of the book which would take place after it and deal with how she's dealing with it and what happened and why it happened ^^.
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mouseluva In reply to Tanashai [2011-07-01 03:16:55 +0000 UTC]
Lolwut. That made no sense to me xD But I'm writing (: Actually, I am not even sure if the stories in the series leading up to that are on dA. They're here though: [link]
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