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Published: 2012-06-04 09:45:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Mother told me
love was just
(around the corner)

And then I bumped into you

I had
pretzels at midnight
(and ice cream at dawn)

And the taste of salty and sweet still hangs on my tongue

It couldn't compare
to the hope
(of home)

And the return of my jet-lagged heart

I cannot dream
until I rest
(in my own sheets)
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Comments: 6

TinzTheCan [2012-06-04 19:03:04 +0000 UTC]

I like the stanza of:
"I had
pretzels at midnight
(and ice cream at dawn)"

and then this:

"And the taste of salty and sweet still hangs on my tongue"

Nice.

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mouseluva In reply to TinzTheCan [2012-06-04 19:04:20 +0000 UTC]

That second bit is the original inspiration. I hat hot chocolate and pretzels before bed last night.
Thank you c:

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TinzTheCan In reply to mouseluva [2012-06-04 19:17:53 +0000 UTC]

Hehe. I figured it had to be something you'd had recently cuz the two together seemed a bit like something you'd do. o:

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mouseluva In reply to TinzTheCan [2012-06-05 04:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Well, I have had pretzels and ice cream together, but not this time xD

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TinzTheCan In reply to mouseluva [2012-06-05 23:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Heh. <3

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mouseluva In reply to TinzTheCan [2012-06-05 23:18:35 +0000 UTC]

(:

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