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MoxieMooo — Splatoon Comic: The Lazy Sniper
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Published: 2016-06-08 00:09:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1230; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 2
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Just another day in the life of an sniperAaaand with that I finally introduce a bit of all my Splatoon OC I hope you like them.
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What grabs the viewers eye at first is the rich blend of color through out the cartoon. the layout is well planned and perfectly executed to help the viewers eye to follow the storyline with the illusion of motion. the facial expression is great. the details is great. the depth is great. when the viewers arrive to the end of this cartoon leaves them breathless and wanting more of the story. the artist accomplished what many artist fail in..initial impact. not only grabs the viewers eye but holds it to the end. the storyline is different and refreshing for a change pace compared to stories of past. i truly commend this artist in the pure creativity and execution which is encouraging to see a new breed of illustrator rising from this generation as well to watch in the future. Overall Awesome work(standing clapping and cheering) wooooooooooohoooooooooooooooo!
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you're totally right, but for long texts, try to make those paragraphs shorter
See? like this it's easier to read a long text.
If you don't press Enter at regular (or almost) intervals, the reader might quickly give up to read your text (what happened to me with yours )
unless this, very good point and I have nothing to say to Starmonyll unless that your art is beautifully done, continue like this!
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Lol..sounds like artist wit ADD..a proper review must be descriptive about the work.. It tells the artist truly about their work than.. "Hey looks good bs".. Get the time check out works from art critics and you understand.. Thanks for the response.. Wink
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attention disorder..its reference to your comments on the review was to long..thats all just response back in jest..wink
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Wow, that's a long comment.
Thanks and I'm glad you like it ^^
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its called giving a proper review for great work. an artist needs more than praise but encouragement to surpass their last post. knowing what the viewer is thinking of what attracts them gives you the artist to know the hot buttons you need to push to capture a broader audience. besides isnt that better than the usual.." hey buddy it looks good"..wink
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Yeah, sure it is ^^
Maybe I should do that too, even though I hardly know what to say
But thanks so much for the comment
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Practice with an open mind..wink
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Just another day in Splatoon
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