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Published: 2015-08-30 06:22:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 5762; Favourites: 96; Downloads: 222
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Have some abs.Jacket removal is not an easy thing to animate. It's a bit stiff here but I learned the basic principle.
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Great work! And all frames fully done on individual papers? Wow!
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Looking good so far.
It seems to me that her arms get too short as she reaches up to unzip her jacket. (Keeping proper proportions has been a problem for me as well in the animations I've done)
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Ah. That's supposed to be foreshortening. I might change it so you can see the bicep a bit more to indicate that.
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Okay, I can see that. (foreshortening's a b**ch, ain't it? 
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With each frame, this looks all the more breath-taking. Cannot wait to see the next progression.
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For doing complex actions such as removing a jacket this is very well done. Β Its also nice to see people keeping traditional animation alive. I don't many people know how much skill is required.
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Wuth all due respect, flash is in its death throes, any chance of releasing this in webm or mp4 format?
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The final version will be released in a few different formats.
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She seems a bit more buxom than normally drawn.
Not that I'm complaining about that. 
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Hmm, yeah, I was actually going to say the jacket itself doesn't look stiff enough, heh.Β Like, when her right-hand side is almost completely off but the left side isn't even off her shoulder, you'd think there'd be more evidence of tension or tightness as it rolls down the left arm.Β Other than that, it's another great addition to an already impressive animation.
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Yeah, that's definitely something to work on.
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