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moyanII — haiku progress chart

Published: 2010-01-19 07:47:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1705; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Description here's the progress of my haiku writing down the year.

you can download the template if you want to fill in the chart too:



full view of the background is here:



reference credit:
ladybug by ~riksha
Sakura Story by =Hantenshi
squirrel by ~nelsonaf
Winter Fox by *Nzeman
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Comments: 10

wants2draw [2011-04-25 17:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Nice ^_^I'm trying to learn Japanese myself. I guess I'll have to write a couple of haiku someday ^_^

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rlkirkland [2010-03-12 15:32:54 +0000 UTC]

Not being able to read Japanese is no hinderence to enjoying the visual appeal of the marriage.

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Djoseph [2010-01-20 23:05:43 +0000 UTC]

Sweet.

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Bogbrush [2010-01-20 17:24:13 +0000 UTC]

It all looks lovely and it's certainly interesting to see the progression, and it gives me the suspicion that we all pretty much started out with pretty 5-7-7 sentances...

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pixieplay [2010-01-20 04:06:25 +0000 UTC]

The layout looks great. Your July 2009 piece is just beautiful.

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the-beastie [2010-01-19 17:18:22 +0000 UTC]

this is beautifully set out, and it's so interesting to see your progress and read your thoughts on each time period. this is a great meme

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somnomollior [2010-01-19 15:27:31 +0000 UTC]

That works so well!

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KorpiHunaja [2010-01-19 08:18:12 +0000 UTC]

indeed, haiku not written from one's personal experience are just exercise in form - but not in the essence of haiku. of course what you were doing in your pre-dA times though is much like i what i did. and many carry on with to this day, no wonder since this seems to be the most common spread (mis)understanding of haiku, at least west (and east) of japan. however even more advanced writers many times seem only to exercise in form.

and now to something completely different... is that not a rendition of one of *Nzeman 's foxes i see in the lower right corner?

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moyanII In reply to KorpiHunaja [2010-01-19 08:30:53 +0000 UTC]

yes!
you reminded me. i have to add credit to all those reference pictures i used.

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KorpiHunaja In reply to moyanII [2010-01-19 15:36:25 +0000 UTC]

and i ought to read through a post before sending it... "like i what i did" q:

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