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I am uploading these pages (2-9) into my scraps so I can at least semi-show off what I have done... the more I look at these pages the more I appreciate them even in pencil form. Plus I am getting some critiques on my mistakes that I wasn't aware of after loading up the first page. So hopefully I can get more advise.

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Ohh boy...

The first panel was a mistranslation on what the Author wants, and how I read it as. The icon was suppose to be: "girl (namely Saber) in provocative poses.". I read it directly word for word as: "girls (multiple) in provocative poses." Hence the mistake I need to change when I do get to inking this. Otherwise a decent page. I'll have to see how far I go with the new poses to self determine my personal rating. Right now it's a 'clean' page. Suggestive but clean...

Description
I am uploading these pages (2-9) into my scraps so I can at least semi-show off what I have done... the more I look at these pages the more I appreciate them even in pencil form. Plus I am getting some critiques on my mistakes that I wasn't aware of after loading up the first page. So hopefully I can get more advise.

____

Ohh boy...

The first panel was a mistranslation on what the Author wants, and how I read it as. The icon was suppose to be: "girl (namely Saber) in provocative poses.". I read it directly word for word as: "girls (multiple) in provocative poses." Hence the mistake I need to change when I do get to inking this. Otherwise a decent page. I'll have to see how far I go with the new poses to self determine my personal rating. Right now it's a 'clean' page. Suggestive but clean...