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Published: 2009-09-30 19:10:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1717; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 52
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Description Here's the lines to my entry for the "Kick My Own Ass" contest that is currently hosting. For those of you that aren't familiar with the gist of a "kick my own ass" contest it's very simple....the artist is to take an old piece of art that they did and redo it. The point is to show just how much progress and growth of an artist.

I have a couple of older pics that I really like and would like to redo at some point, but I posted a poll as to which one that folks really wanted to see redone and they voted for this pic here featuring the dominant and dead sexy Raina Hunter, which is actually great b/c I've been having Raina on the brain for the last 2 weeks or so and have been wanting to do something new with her. The original lines to this are about 2 years old and was originally supposed to be a trio pic featuring Raina and her two partners/best friends Lizzie Dutch and Onnica Graves (both who will make an appearance here on DA very soon!) but I never got around to finishing the full piece.

If you'll notice the remake you'll see that I've added a few new things to Raina....most noticeably is her hair has been chopped down to shoulder length. I was looking at my stuff a while ago and saw that both Sapphira and Raina's long black hair was a bit too similar in design, and being that I've been in the revamping mood I decided that it was about time that I change up Raina's look just a bit. I think she looks really good with her new hairstyle. I'm not gonna stop with shortening her hair...I plan on revamping her B.E.C.A. agent all purpose battlesuit, as I think it's time for her to resume her duties as a cyborg soldier and for us to see that not only is Raina a great hand to hand fighter, but she's surgical with guns and a few other weapons!

You might also notice that Raina's less bulky and more streamlined than she has been as well...now that I have a better grasp and understanding of anatomy, I don't have to make her super bulky with definition lines everywhere to emphasize that she's muscular. I want her, and most of my other gals, to look more She-Hulk/Power Girl muscular and less like female bodybuilders. I also changed the name of the piece to the Perfect Weapon, b/c I've been thinking about changing Raina's nickname of "Bonecrusher" and the Perfect Weapon was a cool one that came to mind. Being that she is an extremely powerful cyborg warrior with unmatched fighting and combat skills with looks to die for, "The Perfect Weapon" would indeed be a fitting moniker for Ms. Hunter here!

****For you Angel Falls folks, Raina just might be relocating to Angel Falls and taking a position in the Special Crimes Unit of the AFPD as a Cybercop! She's filled out her application, had her 1st and 2nd interviews, and is waiting for her drug and background check to go through. Now, she's just waiting to get that phone call to let her know if she's in or not....she's very much qualified and after seeing this [link] I think there might be a new opening in the SCU unit! Stay tuned!!!****

I think I could've done a bit better, but I'm happy so far! Can't wait to see it with colors. It's truly amazing to see just how far Raina has come, as it's been 10 years since I first created her! Colors on this one coming soon!
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Comments: 27

DSNG [2009-10-01 22:01:52 +0000 UTC]

sexy

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to DSNG [2009-10-02 14:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Dualmask [2009-10-01 03:18:17 +0000 UTC]

A strong improvement over the original, especially with the face. The pose seems to have more flair and grace to it.

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to Dualmask [2009-10-01 04:51:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man! I had some trouble with her torso and that angle, and her left calf is a little bigger than her right, but yeah it's definite improvement. And I agree that she does have more flair and grace to it...I think her being more streamlined and less bulky helps that out as well!

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hulkdaddyg [2009-10-01 00:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Nice job!

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to hulkdaddyg [2009-10-01 04:51:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Gary!

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whiteknight222 [2009-09-30 21:57:18 +0000 UTC]

THis turned out super man

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to whiteknight222 [2009-10-01 04:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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whiteknight222 In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2009-10-01 15:03:35 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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hotrod5 [2009-09-30 20:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Raina is a lean, mean, bone crushing machine!

Loving Raina's new physique and hairstyle. This definitely needs to be coloured....

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to hotrod5 [2009-09-30 21:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah yeah...you know it! And did you see my little note in the middle of the artist comments? She may be coming to join the ranks of the Angel Falls Police Dept. along with Det. Angie!

Thanks Dwight....I'm glad you dig Raina's new look! I wanted to spiffy up her design without changing her up too much. Those subtle touches with her hair and physique were nice little ways to achieve the desired effect. And I've got the colors coming in the next few days hopefully!

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hotrod5 In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2009-09-30 22:50:26 +0000 UTC]

I saw the note, Det. Angie could use Raina's help against Poison & Rin and try to catch LFP.

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to hotrod5 [2009-10-01 05:30:02 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...she could definitely help in that regard, but the AFPD Special Crimes Unit has their eye on Raina, as she would be better utilized going after the Criminal Supers like UW, UV, and the gang. Thanks to her cybernetics, she can hang with the big girls with no problem! However, Raina wouldn't mind giving Det. Angie a hand with LFP, Rin, and Poison as well!

That's if and only if Raina gets the job!

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Soviet-Superwoman [2009-09-30 20:00:14 +0000 UTC]

It's the perfect Raina!

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to Soviet-Superwoman [2009-09-30 21:28:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...it's been 10 years since I first created her, but she's better than she's ever been right now!!! Thanks for the fave as well!

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crazyman247 [2009-09-30 19:25:10 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to crazyman247 [2009-09-30 19:47:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Thanks for the fave also!

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crazyman247 In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2009-10-01 17:33:51 +0000 UTC]

its my pleaser

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Shallon4000 [2009-09-30 19:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Cool one Mr. Marcus!

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to Shallon4000 [2009-09-30 19:48:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man!

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Jinzouki [2009-09-30 19:21:53 +0000 UTC]

That's a major improvement overall, especially the hand placement, muscle, and overall shape, congrats on this new version

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to Jinzouki [2009-09-30 19:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you....yep, it's amazing what a difference 2 years can make in artistic growth!

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Jinzouki In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2009-09-30 19:52:57 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, lately I am highly considering re-doing some of my old work as well. I already got one scanned. Are you gonna re-do the other ones in your poll as well? I look forward to seeing your other old works re-done

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to Jinzouki [2009-09-30 19:58:45 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...maybe at some point in the future I'll consider redoing some more of my old favorites as I'm sure that with my current artistic level that I can go back and really breath new life into some of those older pieces.

But I'm all about making some new stuff. This remake was mainly for the contest. That stuff was done in the past, and for the time...that was my best. Sure I could go back and redo my old stuff, but why revisit old ideas and concepts when I can start something fresh and new now? I'm sure I will go and redo some of my other pieces, but it's not high in priority on my list of things to do.

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Jinzouki In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2009-09-30 22:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Same, though I GOTTA redo that Midas Buster pic, my old one is an eyesore yet ironically its one of my more popular pieces. I just posted it cause I was tired of not posting anything and at the time noticed people were getting tons of comments/favs on what is basically doodles Oh well its redone anyway, I just gotta refine it once I'm done with some of my workload. If I may suggest why not redo this one when you have the chance [link] It'd be so cool to see this redone with your new updated style (and with her new costume )

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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to Jinzouki [2009-10-01 05:35:18 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I feel you. There's nothing wrong with going back and redoing old pics...there's a bunch that I would like to give another shot! But I just don't want to make redoing older pieces a top priority. However, if the spirit moves me to where I've just gotta redo something then why not? Plus, I do have a pretty full plate of a bunch of art trades and such that I have to get done sometime soon, along with my own projects!

As for the Sapphira pic...that's definitely one that I want to revisit! And she will most definitely be wearing her new attire!

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Jinzouki In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2009-10-01 05:38:36 +0000 UTC]

Awesome Same here for Midas, she'll be wearing the new costume, not the generic yellow one piece she wore in the first few pics Once I'm caught up I might finish a few I have left unfinished. There's a pencil sketch of Midas which I never got to finish past that point, but I'll finish it once I get a chance Also remember to look at tutorials and stuff to brush up on minor anatomy things here and there.

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