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My First Fanfic, May Contain Mispelling, Grammar Error, and Junk Story, But Enjoy~-----------------------------
Since (y/n) little he was raised by his uncle in vale. The (f/c) haired boy never really knew his parents. He dreamed to become a hunter and a hero like in the book he read. But his uncle die when he was 15 and now he is 17. He lives alone in the small apartement. He is good at combat because his uncle taught him. And he has very unique power.
Night time (y/n) just walking in street of vale until he heard exploding sound. He stopped to see what happend, there are some guy who wearing mask and stealing a crate that looks like a dust crate.
(y/n) : 'dust robbery?, they must be white fang'
There is a red haired guy who holding a crane that yell.
Red Haired Guy : come on! Hurry up! We don't get all night
(y/n) : 'and that's must be the leader, Roman Torchwick'
He thinks as he put on a mask that looks like a skull, and get closer to the group of white fang.
Roman : *notice* hmmm... and who might be are you?
(y/n) : i'm here to stop you from robbing the dust store.
Roman : what kid like you can do?. GET HIM!
Roman ordered his minions to attack the boy. One of them charge at him and throwing a punch that he dodge with ease. The boy send a kick to the man stomach which make him fly to a building near by. Two of them charge at both side of the boy. The boy smirk and jump while opening his legs which make a split kick that cause both of the man knock out by his powerful kick.
Roman : come on! He's just a kid!
Roman charge at the boy and kick him which he block and send him few meters back.
(y/n) : 'he's strong'
Roman : well it's nice knowing you
Roman point his crane to (y/n) and the crane emit a sparkling light.
(y/n) : 'shi-!'
Roman shoot a sparkling light from his crane and explode in front of the boy.
Roman : well that's quite slight dela-
Roman cuts off as he see the boy still standing while surrounded by a glowing (f/c) light
Roman : who the heck are you!?
(y/n) : me?.... im (y/n) (l/n)
(y/n) lift his arm to the front
(y/n) : Summon! Sword!
A Circle that have a (f/c) clour and sword symbol in the middle appear in his hand. And from the circle, a sword come out. (y/n) grabs it and point it to Roman
(y/n) : you're going down!
He said as he charge at Roman while swinging his word. Roman block it with his crane but sends flying to near building by (y/n) strong swinging power.
Roman : 'ugh... this boy is strong'
Roman climb up to building in attempt to run away. (y/n) chase after him and start climbing too. But it was too late. Roman jump off into a plane that led him away.
Roman : Goodbye! (y/n)
(y/n) : wait!
The plane fly away. (y/n) just sigh as he see the plane fly away. His sword turns into many tiny cyrstal shards. He notice a presence and he looks back. He see a blonde haired woman and white haired man wearing glasses and holding a mug and crane.
Man : hello there.
(y/n) : umm... hello?
Man : quite a show you perform there.
(y/n) : um.... thanks?
Man : say how about you join beacon?
(y/n) notice something
(y/n) : are you Ozpin?
Ozpin : indeed i am
(y/n) : and you want me to join beacon?
Ozpin : Absolutely
(y/n) froze there, he can't believe that Ozpin himself ask him to join beacon. He is beyond happy now
(y/n) : really!?
Ozpin : if you want to, then follow me.
Ozpin and the woman walk away. And (y/n) follow them with a sparkling eye. He wonder what is gonna be studying in beacon and become a hunter.
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(A/N) : Hey i know its sucks, bad, and maybe the worst M!reader fanfic ever. But hey! At least i do my best!
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Comments: 14
mehwhocares184 [2016-11-15 00:57:17 +0000 UTC]
This isn't the worst M!Reader fanfic e because ive een one where the writer names you and pretty much makes you himself and it absolutely sucks in grammar and spelling. Keep up the good work!
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MrGaLcO In reply to HALOPLAYER2002 [2016-02-25 04:01:02 +0000 UTC]
Um... isn't he the headmaster of hunter school.
"Beacon"?
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HALOPLAYER2002 In reply to MrGaLcO [2016-02-25 04:46:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh sorry if it's some anima thing I'm not into that kind of stuff 😅
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Your-Italian-lover [2016-01-18 23:50:51 +0000 UTC]
All I have to say is that it's not as bad as you think it is and honestly it's not the worst thing I've read on this site truth be told it's actually really good but like you said yourself spelling and grammar. Also your wording could use a little work but all in all I have to say this a wonderful start to an amazing writing experience here on deviantart and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
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MrGaLcO In reply to Your-Italian-lover [2016-01-19 12:42:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, im really glad that my story is not bad.
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ZephyrTheMighty [2016-01-18 22:31:19 +0000 UTC]
its really far from bad its actually pretty good
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Matthewmedlock [2016-01-18 18:30:25 +0000 UTC]
This is actually realy good, not the best but for a first attempt this is a great start to a hopefully great fanfic
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