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mrgrinmore — Letter 10: September 5th, 2068
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Description 13th Landing Road
Olympus Mons Colony,
Mars Colony
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5th September, 2068

My dear friend P,

When the light is dying
The source needs a spark
A burst of hope renewed

For me that hope is you
For the world, a new world
A new land our fantasy

The world is gray here
While the new is red
Stained with rust and blood
Dreams, sweat and tears

Advances have been made
I know not the details
But nanites are among us

The machines are repairing
Improving and perfecting
Perhaps your salvation

I worry of them though
The gray becoming silver
The misted eyes glow red

Do we save our bodies
Only to lose our souls?
Would you risk the cure?

Let me know, dear P.
I wish to leave this world
To go to space, to you

Should I stay or go?
Should I bring the gray,
The weary void within?

Should I come with silver?
Should I risk to bring hope?
For the both of us?

With desperate longing,
S.
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Comments: 7

DragonsChest [2014-09-16 20:13:41 +0000 UTC]

I found it very interesting... 

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mrgrinmore In reply to DragonsChest [2014-09-16 20:19:00 +0000 UTC]

  Hopefully interesting in a good way...

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DragonsChest In reply to mrgrinmore [2014-09-18 19:25:31 +0000 UTC]

Yes in a good way...

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mrgrinmore In reply to DragonsChest [2014-09-18 21:04:25 +0000 UTC]

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JamieWiles [2014-09-06 15:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Great job

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mrgrinmore In reply to JamieWiles [2014-09-06 22:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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JamieWiles In reply to mrgrinmore [2014-09-10 19:28:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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