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mrmorfium — Rayleen - Lazy day at home

Published: 2013-01-10 21:31:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 2162; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 163
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Description Ehhh...yeah I put Rayleen in the same situation I had at the day
Fooling around on the couch.^^

Comments are welcome.

Poser 2012 pro
Photoshop CS 5

(Update: I canged the wall and couch color and something at the light)
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Comments: 6

PhilipMessina [2013-01-12 01:41:49 +0000 UTC]

The picture looks so good now, thank you for listening.

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PhilipMessina [2013-01-11 04:48:54 +0000 UTC]

I love Rayleen in this picture, but I do not like the background

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mrmorfium In reply to PhilipMessina [2013-01-11 08:44:39 +0000 UTC]

why ?

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PhilipMessina In reply to mrmorfium [2013-01-11 09:47:39 +0000 UTC]

Because Rayleen is beautifully lit, but the background is far to bright and flat.
There is a green pattern on the wall that clashes with the red colour along the bottom of the couch she is sitting on.
There is a big space on the top right of the frame with a bare wall, yet the picture behind her is centred, it could fill this space.
The left side with the bookshelf and green wall makes the composition too busy on one side.
Hope you don't mind my comments, it's only because you asked.

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mrmorfium In reply to PhilipMessina [2013-01-11 10:24:59 +0000 UTC]

So I hope I understand it right, you say there are too different colors and too much blank space?

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PhilipMessina In reply to mrmorfium [2013-01-11 11:57:14 +0000 UTC]

And the background is too bright.

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