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Published: 2009-04-18 14:32:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 2056; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 56
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been working on it for 4 hours and just finished itit was my intention to get a factory look
i did the "low quality" look on purpose
cinema 4d-photoshop as always
stocks: sxc.hu
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Seeing as i dont have a premium account i will critique in the comment.
Ok for starters this is a very interesting work.
But what mainly puts me off is your motion blurring, i think there is way to much of it. A nice ammount of blurring in teh right places would really help this, try blurring a little bit on the edges of the c4d and to the back of it. I would have left your factory stock untouched, maybe a little blurred at the back but not a motion blur.
I love your text placement, it both looks blended well and is very clever. I think i would have used a slightly different font though, a bolder font maybe.
The colour scheme for your c4d also looks great
Another thing that puts me off is your method of lighting. You have done it to both behind the c4d and the windows of the factory. I would have done it at the back of the c4d, blurred it slightly, and i wouldnt have made it as strong as it is at the moment.
Im not sure if it was the stock you used or if you did this but i think the stock just looks werid i think you added more colours to it and it looks a bit too sharp.
So all in all this a great lp, but it needs some more tweaks to add better depth and lighting.
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thanks for the critique
but what do you mean with motion blur in this piece?
because i don't used it and can't change it if i don't know what u mean xD
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Erm well its hard to explain.
By motion blur i mean it looks like its blurred, then that blur has been stretched out to make it look like its moving. Its a fillter under the blur catagory in photoshop.
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i know but i didn't used it xD
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Oh ok lol was it maybe smudging or some other fillter?
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i did used the bur tool
but not motion blur
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Hmm i wonder why it came out like it did then?
maybe its just my eyes lmfao
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