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THANK YOU PatchyFallenstar A MILLION TIMES OVER FOR THE NEW REF SHEET's!!!! THEY LOOK INCREDIBLE!!!!General Information
Name : Cinderkit || Cinderpaw || Cindermoon || Cinderstar
Gender : Female
Age : 4 years old (not doing the moon conversion)
Mentor : was Cursedsong before she left to become Cursedstar of Pebbleclan
Physical AppearancePelt : A yellow orange color, rough to the touch and very short. So short you can almost make out her scars.
Maintenance : Minimally groomed.
Length : Short
Eyes : almost a lime green
Build : muscular, and lean.
Height : Large for a female, average height of a male.
Personality : ::Oath-Keeper:: ::Strong:: ::Short Temper:: ::Loyal::
Oath-Keeper: Cinderstar does not break promises. As a warrior, she believes you must have enough strong allies if you ever wish to ward of enemies. Breaking a promise will leave you one less ally. That being said, Cinderstar does not make oaths she does not plan on keeping. Her word is worth more than gold.
Strong: Strength alone might not cover this. Cinderstar enjoys battle a bit too fiercely for what's healthy. The blood lust she feels when driven into a corner makes her feel powerful, and in return this is the power that drives her to victory. However, as leader she understands not all battles can be won immediately, but she has no qualms biding her time, victory will be hers eventually is she has any input on it. In battle she can handle a full grown male warrior without need of assistance, in fact, she would probably prefer it if everyone stayed in the camp and she just handled the battles on her own.
Short Tempered: Her largest flaw as far as she is concerned. When tensions are high Cinderstar is normally the first to snap, sometimes throwing the Warrior Code away with it. The she-cat has many snapping points, so if you wish to stay on her pleasant side it would be best to keep the conversation focused on battle strategies and training, her favorite kinds of conversations.
Loyal: Cinderstar follows rules to a T. She breathes the warrior code, all decisions she makes are strictly scanned for any breaks of code-ly conduct.
History :
Past -
Born into Moonclan in a litter of three, kit of Moonstorm and Oakenflame, with one sister Eagleheart and a little brother.
The little tom never made is past kit-hood before passing away.
Cinderkit and Eaglekit where almost apprentices when a sickness swept through the clan, killing their parents in it's wake.
Cinderkit, shocked by the sudden loss of her parents, became over protective of her sister, reminding her the warrior code was there to keep them safe, that the clan was all they had left.
Reaching warrior-ship, Cinderpaw was given the name Cindermoon, in honor of her mother, as well as the clan that raised her. Eaglepaw became Eagleheart.
To Cindermoon's shock, Eagleheart was quickly made deputy of Moonclan, while Cindermoon still hadn't received her first apprentice yet.
It was around this time Cursedsong, Cinderpaw's mentor, left to create Pebbleclan as Cursedstar.
When a Badger was found in Moonclan territory, Eagleheart was selected by Patchstar to lead the group of warriors to chase it out.
Eagleheart never returned.
Devastated, now by the loss of her sister, Cindermoon grew bitter, angry and restless.
On a border patrol lead by the new deputy Joltflash, Cindermoon spotted a Snowclan apprentice race into Moonclan territory chasing a rabbit.
The other Moonclanners in the patrol had to all but pry Cindermoon's jaws off the apprentice's throat once the she-cat had gotten her claws on it.
Patchstar personally apologized to Crystalstar, and since the two leaders where on good terms and the apprentice survived, the Snowclan leader let it go with a warning.
Cindermoon was punished by being confined to the Moonclan camp until she calmed down.
It wouldn't be for many moons before she had control over her emotions once again, and with personal support from Patchstar, learn to control the blood lust she now felt for battle.
Over many, many moons, Cindermoon grew to become more and more focused in training, both herself and new apprentices, she had no time for kits or mates, nor did she feel interested.
This is when Raven and Spirit's clan enter Cindermoon's life. read more here
Finally, the new leader takes her place in the new clan, to what is today the most tenacious of the clans. Just like Cinderstar herself.
Recent -
After the war with Moonclan, something has changed in Cinderstar, shifting, turning, like some kind of gear or wheel.
At this rate, she might have difficulty keeping her clan together through the troubles to come.
Physical (Out of ten)
Strength : 10
Attack (includes accuracy, etc) : 8
Speed : 8
Endurance : 10
Tactics : 6
Other (Out of ten)
Swimming : 1 (Cinderstar hates water)
Climbing : 6 (born and raised in Moonclan, Cinderstar may never grow used to climbing trees)
Running : 8
Senses (Out of ten)
Sight : 7
Hearing : 8
Scent : 10
Relationship InformationOrientation : Heterosexual
Status : Complicated
ll No opinion / neutral
ll Acquaintance
|| Not sure
ll Friend
ll Good Friend
ll Best Friend
ll Pity (spiteful)
ll Sympathy (compassionate)
ll Remorse
ll Mentor/Apprentice
ll Family
ll Relative by choice/adopted
ll Likes
ll Platonic/Familial Love
ll Inseparable (friendship)
ll Interested in / Nervous
ll Suspicious / Scared
ll Untrusted / Terrified
ll Crush
ll Love
ll Mate
ll Respect
ll Admire
ll Idolized
|| Dislike
ll Hates
ll Loath
|| Dead
Dawnclan:
l l l l | Oakenflame: Father. I take after him if i remember right.
l l l l | Moonstorm: Mother. She was beautiful I think.
l l l l | Eagleheart: My dearest sister. I wish I could have protected her . .
l l l l | Cursedstar: My mentor, my fellow leader, my friend. She taught me everything I needed to know for what makes a good warrior. She was the first to greet my new clan, and i owe her everything for giving us part of Pebbleclan's territory like she did. Even though she's gone, i'm glad I can still see her when I visit Starclan from time to time.
l l l l | Patchstar: My leader, my family, my fellow leader, my friend. Words could never express what Patchstar did for me. When Eagleheart died I was so lost and hurt, but Patchstar pulled me back. I would have willingly lived out the rest of my days as her warrior. Even though she's gone, i'm glad I can still see her when I visit Starclan from time to time.
l l | l | Crystalstar: While she and Patchstar may have been on good terms, ever since I attacked her clan's apprentice I feel she had always been waiting for a chance to get me. She led her clan well, but I can't shake this feeling that it was personal malice with me that drove her to attack Dawnclan. It doesn't help but make things more unnerving that I can't ask her in Starclan.
l l l l | Joltflash: Even though we never spoke much personally, she was a good deputy. I think Eagleheart would have been pleased that such a cat replaced her as Deputy. However, her death was uncalled for, and I would avenge her a thousand times over if it wasn't for Starclan's determination to keep Fallenstar as leader.
l l l l Shadedfang: He has come a long way since he was last known as 'Raven'. My best warrior, though still a bit shy. I feel he's the only one I can lean on in times of trouble, he keeps me grounded when I want to run. He's the one who pointed out I cannot show weakness to the clan, I am their leader, if I can't keep myself together in troubled times, how can i expect them to?
l l | | Kindlestar: I don't believe we will ever see eye to eye, we seem to have different views on most subjects. Although I am thankful she came through with the War with Moonclan, I don't believe Dawnclan and Pebbleclan would have stood a chance without her help. For that, she had my gratitude.
l l l l Mossheart: My dearest apprentice. She would have made such a great leader, if only she had followed the code. . .
l l l l Fernpelt: My deputy. I don't know what I would have done if Fernpelt hadn't stepped forward to become deputy. His loyalty knows no bounds, I'm glad he was with the rogues who created Dawnclan.
l l Silentbreeze: Used to be known as 'Lily'. I still don't quiet understand why she wanted to change her name. She doesn't seem to like me too much though, however I can't fathom what i've done to upset her. .
l l l l Duskfire: He is a very handsome young tom, but I don't have any kind of feelings for one so young, let alone the pushy type. One day he'll find a nice she-cat and stop pestering me.
l l l Rainpaw: She was captured right after becoming an apprentice. I'm very glad to have my apprentice back now, I have a lot to teach her.
l l l l Echostar: . . .
l l l Ebonystar: We get along well, he seems to be a very open and honest tom, and i appreciate warriors like such. After the war I can gladly say Pebbleclan and Dawnclan's bond is stronger than ever thanks to this new leader.
(i know there are more ppl, but i'm gunna stop here for now, gomen)
RP for a relationship!
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Comments: 53
Emberria In reply to ms-chowder [2014-11-17 10:35:24 +0000 UTC]
Okay~ do you wanna start or me?
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Emberria In reply to ms-chowder [2014-11-18 02:37:43 +0000 UTC]
Alright~
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Warmrain's tail flickered in the cool afternoon breeze, his head raised high, and his jaws clasped shut on a lemming. He was just now heading into the camp from a solo hunt. Of course all he found was this lemming within a four hour span.
So he finally decided to call it quits and return to camp. Hopefully he wouldn't run into Chasingwhisper on the way back.
Warmrain finally trotted into the somewhat empty camp, making his way to where the fresh kill pile was.
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ms-chowder In reply to Emberria [2014-11-18 03:06:05 +0000 UTC]
Cinderstar sat beside the fresh-kill pile, her nose wrinkling as she pulled out crow-food.
She was in a bitter mood, Fernpelt had told her he wanted to step down. She needed to select someone new as deputy.
not what i want to spend my day worrying about the leader mentally grumbled to herself, scratching some dirt over the rotting prey beside her.
However the dark tom's presence snapped the orange she-cat's attention back into the present.
"Warmrain" she murmured, taking note that his fur had taken on a blacker color in the leaf-bare light.
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Emberria In reply to ms-chowder [2014-11-18 03:12:47 +0000 UTC]
"Hello Cinderstar!" Warmrain smiled, his voice slightly muffled by the lemming in his mouth.
His olive eyes gazed down to the pile of prey. He mentally frowned at the sight of some crow food. "Oh..." he muttered softly, his ears slowly bending back against his head. He dropped the lemming in front of his paws. "Do you want this?" He asked in a warm voice, taking notice of his leader's bitter mood almost instantly. He gingerly nudged the freshly killed lemming towards her.
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ms-chowder In reply to Emberria [2014-11-18 03:19:48 +0000 UTC]
Cinderstar raised her eyebrows at this. She smiled slightly before shaking her head.
"Sorry, i'm not very hungry. The cold tends to put me on edge. Starving kits and all that."
She then looked the tom over. He was quiet, but kind maybe a little timid. These are traits she wasn't entirely fond of in deputy's as of late, but who was she to judge. She wasn't worthy to be leader, she had no right to choose.
The leader's expression took on a dark edge as this thought crossed her mind.
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Emberria In reply to ms-chowder [2014-11-18 03:46:40 +0000 UTC]
"Oh...Em, ...Alright." Warmrain picked the lemming up, using his right paw to push past any fool prey, and placed the lemming down into the now cleared patchy of crisp grass.
His eyes shifted to his leader; some worry, some nervousness... He lifted his head up, taking into account her dark expression. He shocked him...whatever could of been the matter? "Is there...something wrong?"
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ms-chowder In reply to Emberria [2014-11-18 03:52:09 +0000 UTC]
Cinderstar hadn't even noticed she was glaring at Warmrain before his horrified expression clicked.
"s-sorry" the she-cat stood up, shaking out her sad pelt. "It's just . . . been a long morning." she sighed, glancing towards the camp entrance.
"You know, it feels like i haven't patrolled the borders in forever. You aren't doing anything now are you?" the leader huffed, trying to change the subject.
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Emberria In reply to ms-chowder [2014-11-18 03:55:07 +0000 UTC]
Warmrain shook his head; his shocked expression vanished when she had walked away from him. "Oh...um...no! I don't have anything planned." He spun around...disregarding her apologize with a small nod, trotting towards his leader..very careful to not tread too close to her.
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ms-chowder In reply to Emberria [2014-11-18 04:00:21 +0000 UTC]
Cinderstar inwardly sighed. She might ask well take the time to question him.
-A- (one Rowanpaw later)
The crisp thin lead-bare air turned the two cat's breath's into mist.
"So tell me. Warmrain. Have you gotten the chance to lead a patrol yet?" the leader grunted halfheartedly.
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Emberria In reply to ms-chowder [2014-11-18 04:04:18 +0000 UTC]
Warmrain's eyes were scanning the orange and brown surroundings, however he was still fully aware that his leader was speaking to him.
"Nope. I haven't." He answered rather bluntly, although he mentally cringed at his tone that he just spoke in. This is your leader! You shouldn't talk to her like that! His olive eyes moved towards the orange feline, watching her was they walked.
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ms-chowder In reply to Emberria [2014-11-18 04:22:36 +0000 UTC]
Cinderstar nodded slowly. "Why do you think you haven't been selected yet."
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Emberria In reply to ms-chowder [2014-11-18 04:25:33 +0000 UTC]
His eyes quickly averted away from Cinderstar, and towards the sky. "...Honestly...I think it's because the ways I've been acting..." He moved his head and eyes back down to her. "I haven't been as serious as I can be."
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ms-chowder In reply to Emberria [2014-11-18 04:27:48 +0000 UTC]
"How so?" Cinderstar murmured stepping around a tree, keeping her eyes in front of her.
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Emberria In reply to ms-chowder [2014-11-18 04:32:54 +0000 UTC]
Warmrain sighed quietly, his head began to lower...he followed after her.
"I think I'm too childish, too stupid... Chasingwhisper and a few others say I'm too soft or annoying." He meowed, masking his disappointed emotions with a dull tone...his tail slowly began to droop.
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ms-chowder In reply to Emberria [2014-11-18 07:41:48 +0000 UTC]
"Do you always believe what other's tell you?" Cinderstar grunted, glancing at the tom.
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Emberria In reply to ms-chowder [2014-11-18 09:21:58 +0000 UTC]
His head rose a little. "Oh ..no, I don't." His voice held some curiosity as to why Cinderstar was asking him these questions.
But like he'd question her at all.
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ms-chowder In reply to Furdora [2014-09-18 21:01:29 +0000 UTC]
they be tighter then a tight rope
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Miukitty [2014-09-17 00:18:10 +0000 UTC]
woooo cinders <33
Rainpaw: uh hi ? // has no idea how to approach her leader/mentor
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ms-chowder In reply to Miukitty [2014-09-18 20:57:36 +0000 UTC]
Cinderstar: *swoops cape over small Rainpaw* COME CHILD. OFF TO TRAIN WE GO. *fits Rainpaw with weights then snaps whip*
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Miukitty In reply to ms-chowder [2014-09-20 02:02:44 +0000 UTC]
Rainpaw: crapppppppppp //attempts to run away but falls with all the weights
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ms-chowder In reply to Miukitty [2014-09-22 00:51:09 +0000 UTC]
Cinderstar: YOU'LL BE DELAYED AT THIS RATE //cracks whip
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ms-chowder In reply to Miukitty [2014-09-22 00:54:40 +0000 UTC]
Cinderstar: ONE MOON DELAYED //throws a fish at you
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Miukitty In reply to ms-chowder [2014-09-22 00:58:12 +0000 UTC]
Rainpaw: IT'S ON NOW //catches fish and flies away
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ms-chowder In reply to Miukitty [2014-09-22 01:13:11 +0000 UTC]
Cinderstar: *gasps* I've finally done it. I've trained an apprentice to the point they've evolved into something beyond a cat. //salutes the receding image of Rainpaw
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Miukitty In reply to ms-chowder [2014-09-22 03:23:49 +0000 UTC]
Rainpaw Do not worry mentor. when i discover a new magical land i shall name it in your honor //salutes back
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ms-chowder In reply to Miukitty [2014-09-22 03:35:38 +0000 UTC]
Cinder: //sheds a single tear
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ZephyrThunder [2014-09-16 22:28:07 +0000 UTC]
we need to make her and scorchie have a relationship holy crap
SHES GORGEOUS
SHES GORGEOUS
SHES GORGEOUS
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ZephyrThunder In reply to ms-chowder [2014-09-19 23:06:40 +0000 UTC]
tell me when you have time to rp
scorch and cinder must be nakama buddies
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ms-chowder In reply to ZephyrThunder [2014-09-21 18:43:15 +0000 UTC]
i will send note via carrier pigeon
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ZephyrThunder In reply to ms-chowder [2014-09-23 01:18:07 +0000 UTC]
i shall await its arrival
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PatchyFallenstar [2014-09-16 17:07:04 +0000 UTC]
YAY this is the first time I have ever seen Cinders actually have a description and stuff, it's beautiful :')
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ms-chowder In reply to PatchyFallenstar [2014-09-16 17:20:56 +0000 UTC]
SHE KNOWS EVERYONE AND HAS LIVED THROUGH SO MUCH. aH.
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ms-chowder In reply to PatchyFallenstar [2014-09-22 00:52:05 +0000 UTC]
sexy'ist mo fo who ever darn lived
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SnowQueenGoddess [2014-09-16 14:36:29 +0000 UTC]
Such a pretty kitty :3
Love Echo's description XD three dots sum everything up perfectly!
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Willuvee In reply to ms-chowder [2014-09-16 22:37:42 +0000 UTC]
Now we all see why
WHYISITONECHOSTAR?!*gasps*DAWNSNOWKITS?!
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Willuvee In reply to ms-chowder [2014-09-22 03:06:17 +0000 UTC]
I SEE EVERYTHING CINDERS
IM A STALKER
I SEE A LOT IF I SEE A COMMENT THAT LOOKS WORTH STALKING
I SEE EVERYTHING.
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