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MsGreene — An Electrifying Night with The Mask
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Published: 2019-01-03 10:15:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 79704; Favourites: 105; Downloads: 78
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I was going to write a story for this, but in all likelihood I won't get around to it for a long time. It would just be a single transformation story. It would be a little more explicit too, if you know what I mean. The basics go:A girl has rented a limosuine and wants to go out stunting at the club with her friends. She knows where some pro athletes go after their games and she wants to crash the party and score herself a soccer/football player. For plot purposes, the bar they go to is having a masked ball or costume contest sort of themed night. The girl's friends can't go for various reasons or straight up call her a hoe and tell her she is guranteeing herself a bad night by trying to bang the local version of Ronaldo. It probably ain't gonna happen and she's setting herself up for a dissapointment. She gets all offended and self-rightous and decides "Fuck y'all I can have fun by myself." She goes out to her limousine and keeps her fancy mask in her bag. She's close to tears, so the driver gives her space and shuts the privacy window. As they get close to the event, surprise surprise, one of her asshole roommates/friends has swapped her cute mask with a different one. As far as she and her friends know, The Mask is just some ugly old hunk of wood. Without the cute matching outfit, they've basically ruinned any shot she had with local Ronaldo. Her friends are assholes. But just as the driver's making the last turn to the club, The Mask shines mysteriously and she can't help but bring it closer. The Mask helps her anyway and jumps to her face landing with a splat. The Mask wraps around her head with a thirst, thrusting it's way to the back of the head reaching further each time. She tosses and turns all around the limo fighting it. Inside the cabin, the momentum of the car and The Mask pulling itself around her are nauseating duo. She can barely control herself until the forces seperating her and The Mask explode sending her into a green twister. It bounces off the walls and throws the limousine all over the road. The twister sheds smoke and fog with each spin going haphazardly around and around the limo. I slams into the privacy window shattering it to pieces. The driver decides to just ditch the gig and leaps from the out of control car. The driverless limo is at the whim of the Masked chaos in the back and crashes into a streat lamp just outside the club. As the twister settles inside, excess electricty dances around the edges of the car. A high-heeled leg kicks open the back door and green smoke pours out from the cabin. Out steps The Mask, tall, dark, and sexy. She's ready to conquer her man.
If I was going to write this out I debated showing The Mask's trip through the club and finding and seducing her Ronaldo, but it would have been a lot. I was thinking she'd bring him back to the limo and the smoke inside would be a sort of afrodesiac and make things extra hot and steamy (but that sounded too much like date rape to me haha). The Ronaldo type would see all the smoke and ask, "What did you do in here?" then The Mask would lean in and whisper, "The important question is what are we gonna do in here," before kissing him with luscious purple lips. Would have been fun to write but if I'm working on Mask stuff, there's other Mask projects I'd rather focus on. So you'll just have to rely on your imagination to figure out what her curves feel like in that tight dress pressed up against your body
...Or pressed up against a world class athlete's body. Whatever floats your boat.
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I am one of those people who would love to see this story made. It doesn't need to go to the deepest details on what happens in the car, it can stay as hidden like an inuendo in a kids cartoon 
1. You say her friends are assholes. So lets give them a reason for that. The girl is the type of person who is always broke, as in she lives in like a rundown appartment, can't hold a job for long and is always asking for some money from her "Friends". But somehow, she always seem to get these large sums of money from who knows where. Examples being, she has to pay the rent, she has been saying she will pay next week, 1 month later she pays for everything. A lot of people would find that annoying that someone with out a job constantly pulls out money when they need it.
2. Why not make the limo part of her? As in after the driver has jumped out, the car goes wild and crashes into something, only for it to be intact at the destination. But it doesn't look like the original limo anymore. The limo is now part of her mask persona and the limo even acts the way as well. It looks like what she wants it to look like and it would make decisions how she would make them. Example being, the limo is at a red light and a very cute guy is crossing the street, as the girl is inside the car, the car will literally react to the cute guy like she would. Doing the wolf whistle, purring its engines and so on.
3. Why not make her chase multiple Ronaldos XP Since it's a costume party, she could mistake many guys as Ronaldo and each Ronaldo acts differently to her approach XD 1 Ronaldo clearly liking that he is being constantly showered with kisses and getting very close to scoring with a sexy lady, only for his costume to come off and reveal that he ain't Ronaldo and he did try to tell her that earlier. 1 Ronaldo tries to run from her, clearly not liking her at all but constantly ends up in tight spots. And he is relieved when costume comes and reveals he ain't Ronaldo. And of course the actual Ronaldo could end up on that, what you call "date rape" all the while the limo is going all crazy around town.
Plus it could just be 2 chapters and that's it. 1 chapter about the girl and her transformation, her taking a first look at the club and ending it with her spotting someone who looks like Ronaldo. 2 chapter is just her going after each Ronaldo and finally getting the real one.
But those are just some ideas from a guy who ain't good at writing
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Hahaha those are some good ideas. I've thought of somethings similar to them. But now that I see that my little bits of a story helped create an ENTIRE story for someone who "ain't good at writing," maybe I should just leave it as is and let everyone fill in the details as they'd like. Sort of like how Peel-r did his photos. Maybe. If I do decide to write this it'd be months away. Please feel free to take a swing at it if you feel like it. And I always like hearing ideas, as long as they aren't listed out like demands haha, so thanks for writing them out like you did and doing it so graciously.
1. There would definitely be a clashing personalities thing between her friends. If this girl has gone to the trouble of renting a limo for her friends and they all decide to ditch her she definitely ain't going to be the angel of this story. I've also been throwing around ideas for another more carnal story like this one about a girl trying to get sugar daddies and lo'and behold, The Mask can sure help out with that. I was going back and forth if this should be the first chapter of that or if I could make this girl and the sugar daddy one roommates so I could merge their stories into one. So funny you got the same idea of continuously "somehow" finding the money to pay rent.
2. I thought about doing more stuff with the car. The electricity around the car was taken from Son of The Mask and in the finale of that one they make his car look ludicrous. A tad too over the top if you ask me, but I could definitely do a toned down version of that. For the image, the honest answer for why the limo is still just a limo is cause I didn't want to spend even more time on this. This was the original image I used: www2.pictures.zimbio.com/gi/La… so by the time I'm putting electricity around the car the image is already been through photoshop hell and back. Took me like 30 minutes to just find a limo photographed at the right eye level and then I had to contort it to get the right parked angle I needed to match the street photo. I added the crowd to the right, the smoke all over and I felt like I was right at the edge of making the photo too busy. Less is more, you know, and I kept on adding more and more lighting bolts.
I do like the idea of her prowling around town and the car getting a little animated too. I'd just have to be careful so I don't cross into Pixar's Cars territory. Purring the engine is a funny ass pun though. And I like the idea of a cat call whistle horn for the drive by. Funny reverse of the norms.
3.That's a funny idea of mistaking the costumes for the real athlete but I probably wouldn't make that the main conflict in seducing her "Ronaldo" boy toy (It wouldn't actually be Ronaldo btw, but like you know, a fit as hell athlete type. Ronaldo just has a great face too haha). I feel like the more The Mask "fails" in the story the less powerful and attractive the idea of The Mask becomes. To me at least. Like she can make mistakes but I want The Mask to always have an answer for them and she does it in smooth style. Like I'd probably include it as a quick joke when she's already found her athlete and is seducing him. She's in club close to making that first kiss moment happen but her attention gets drawn elsewhere for some reason and when she looks back for her kiss she sees that "Ronaldo" moved somewhere else and some guy in a "Ronaldo" costume is in his place trying to still kiss The Mask. Then she'd grab his face and shove him over and go strut to her real man. I think a better main conflict in the club, for me personally, would be the competition between her and other women to put out for the athletes. Her friend's kind of hate her plan cause there's no way she's going to get the athlete's attention in a sea of other hot slutty club girls. That's where The Mask can help out with it's whole "all your dreams and desires" promise. But then again I struggle when I have to have to write about The Mask "putting on a show" for the crowd. It's why it took forever to release My Mask and Me 10 where Ashley takes over the bar. Those scenes just work better as a comic or movie. It's hard to describe a dazzling show full of visual gags.
Also, note on my "date rape" description, it wouldn't be rape. The guy is definitely into it and already wants to have sex. The intoxicating smoke in the car would do just that. Intoxicate. Just like how it's fun to get drunk and have messy sex as a couple, not like she's giving the guy a roofy. The smoke would just be an extension of the seductive magic of The Mask. Freaky Masked sex typically just gets alluded to by saying they get engulfed in a twister, which sounds like fun but I wanted to add another Mask element into the mix. Just when I picture the guy coming into the limo, getting a whiff of the smoke, kind of having his eyes and body relax, and then The Mask gets kinky with sensations turned up to 11, it just sounds pretty dang rapey until I mention sensations turned up to 11. Idk, I just like the intoxicating attraction The Mask could create, I might just have to get past my own aversion to it.
That is how I'd plan on breaking down the chapters if I made it a bigger story. But if (and at this point that's a big IF) I write this story out I'd try to have it be similar to Tranquility's length. Just about 10 pages or something. 2 or 3 pages with her friends, 1 sad one in the limo, 1 transforming in the limo, 2 in the club, 1 or 2 with the athlete where it gets all sexy, and 1 the following morning when she wakes up Maskless next to him. But as writer, when I share something like this (the image, or my plot plans) I get that sense of accomplishment that I do when I finish writing a chapter, so I just might not be motivated to write all this out again in a narrative. I do love transformations in cars though. This would be my third one I think and I've only written like 5 or 6 total haha. What I'm trying to say is, I love the brainstorming, especially about this story, but don't get your hopes up on me publishing this story anytime soon. If you want to see your ideas on paper though, you have my permission to give the old pen and paper or keyboard and word document a try. If you do I look forward to reading it
Thanks for the thoughts
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Glad to hear you like the ideas ^^ And also, demanding in my opinion is only allowed if the writer is actually paid to do it. If I paid you to write the story, then I could tell you what you have to write to make it a good story. But since I am not paying, I am allowed to at least give you ideas that you could work with. So I am glad to hear that you liked my ideas cause I was offering them (: But I am now gonna give some after thoughts to your ideas if that's okay?
2. Who says you have to make the limo close to pixars cars style? The limo can just look like a normal limo, it just has a new color, maybe one of those art like paint jobs of her theme, and just decorations that match her masked theme as well. It ain't a sentient being XD It's just a car that has somehow been given it's masters new personality but it still only goes where the owner wants it to go.
3. Well how about making it so that there are 2 Ronaldos and she is just jumping between the 2 of them? You know those double date episodes in comedy shows/cartoons? She starts flirting with 1, says she will be right back because she decided to go get something, but instead of going to where the Ronaldo she was flirting with, she sees the other Ronaldo and makes her way to him and continues flirting, all the while both guys are always confused on the subject she is talking about, only to be pulled into her rhythm. The actual Ronaldo is kinda weirded out by her but is slowly being won over, while the other is confused and immediatly won over. I ain't sure but it could go something like this, she flirts with the original, seduces the other, continues to flirt with the originnal, makes out with the other one, tries to make out with the original, almost ends up taking the other to a drive around town and then takes the original to a drive around town. And other women trying to flirt with him could be added anywhere XD
Oh I get what you mean. It feels satisfying when you finally let out the idea in some form, then you just don't feel like continueing it. But there are times when you just gotta do it even when you are already satisfied. Sure it can get boring to continue work you think is finished, but the feeling of long term satisfaction is something else. But you write your stories, and IF you ever decide to make this story. Then I hope it's gonna be better then what ever I could come up with.
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Haha again, with ideas as fleshed out at yours I really suggest you take a crack at writing your own Mask story. It's not like your short on ideas it seems.
That's true, there's a different long form creative satisfaction you can get from work that's made with a nice bow on top, but I purposefully make it so I only get that kind of satisfaction from things I do in my professional life that I can put on a resume. I won't be working on Mask stuff for awhile now. I understand there are times I gotta keep working on things when I'm satisfied, but this isn't one of them. Real life will take the wheel again. But I'll be back eventually haha
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Good luck with that then ^^
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Thanks!!! All I need is a pic of the transformation inside the car now
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That would be spectacular!!!
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Thanks! Congrats on finishing your return of the green story by the way. Not sure if I got around to saying that yet haha
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Thank you! Surprised the little story is getting so much love along with the picture haha
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed
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You did a fabulous job! History is just a complement and does its role very well. The image is really very interesting and I really love the effects. The atmosphere fits perfectly with the mask.
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Thank you! I might keep up with this atmosphere of a gif, with the smoke still swelling from the transformation. And yeah, I wanted a little bit of a story to go along with it. I might try to post more photos like this. Gifs with a small sampling of a story just for an idea of context.
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Thank you! "Magnificent" written in French makes any compliment better
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