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Here he is. This would be his Shikai, right. I'm not sure about the clothes, but i just wanted to get something done before i post the next chapter on fanfiction! When you like it, I'm going to do a real version of this... If not.. it'll go to scraps. Please help me if something is off!Here's the link to the story! [link]
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Lauria5 [2013-05-27 20:23:40 +0000 UTC]
Love it, his new coat is brilliant, and the newest chapter was awesome! Keep writing and update soon! (And keep drawing! Can't wait for the colored version of this!)
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95Jezzica [2013-05-27 18:59:56 +0000 UTC]
If it's Ichigo it looks more like his Bankai.
[link] <-- This is his Shikai.
But great art anyway!
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mspauly In reply to 95Jezzica [2013-05-27 19:59:35 +0000 UTC]
I'm aware of that. I drew this for my fanfiction. There this would be his Shikai.
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95Jezzica In reply to mspauly [2013-05-27 21:18:42 +0000 UTC]
So what is his bankai in your fanfiction?
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mspauly In reply to 95Jezzica [2013-05-28 05:22:35 +0000 UTC]
Well i sure have something in mind, but i won't tell because it has not been revealed in the story yet. You'll have to read it, than you'd know.
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95Jezzica In reply to mspauly [2013-05-28 14:54:16 +0000 UTC]
*then |||||||| Please don't take any offence in the correction,
but as a fellow writer I thought I should point out the important difference between those two words.
You would be surprised over how big of a difference it can make.
For a example to better explain what I mean:
"I would rather die first than help you out."
"Would you help me after you've died then?"
I also noticed you tend to mix those two words in your fanfiction.
At least in the prologue and the two first chapters.
So please take a extra look at those and think about it in the future...?
I'm sorry if I sounded rude, that was never my intention.
I just don't know how to express myself with other words than those above.
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mspauly In reply to 95Jezzica [2013-05-29 11:03:02 +0000 UTC]
No offense taken. it is not my native language after all so i'm glad if someone points that out for me.
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95Jezzica In reply to mspauly [2013-05-29 14:08:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you and you're welcome then...? x)
Btw, English isn't my native language either. It's Swedish.
What's yours?
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mspauly In reply to 95Jezzica [2013-06-09 16:20:50 +0000 UTC]
Oh, wow! I'm from Germany.
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95Jezzica In reply to mspauly [2013-06-11 16:19:02 +0000 UTC]
Guten Tag dann, MsPauly.
Ich bin Jezzica! Wie(?) du siehst ich klein Deutsch kΓΆnnen, aber ich bin nicht so gut... x)
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My Deutsch isn't even close to perfect - but did you understand everything I wrote?
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mspauly In reply to 95Jezzica [2013-06-13 11:01:03 +0000 UTC]
Das war schon gar nicht so schlecht! Ich habe dich verstanden.
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That was not bad! But i did understand you.
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95Jezzica In reply to mspauly [2013-06-18 16:41:12 +0000 UTC]
Yeach, I understood you too.
It's quite fun actually!
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