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Published: 2007-10-10 16:12:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 247; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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concept sketch preview for the character of Tiatariona a vixen in 's Centriiost Project.I think the shoulders need to be brought in a little bit....but overall quite pleased with her.
her tail is shaded to show the white tip, but normal coloration is the same as her red fur.
i like her ears, tail and hands.
Perhaps her real name can be Tiza M'iago?
I imagine her granny calling her Tia Tia......
Loving her feet........
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Dear Muarw;
Just so you are aware, my first impression upon seeing this was that either her hair styling or her eyes remind me of a punk rocker girl, most comfortable in leather and chained metal. I hesitate to use the words "cheap" and "trashy", but she does not look quite right for her intended role/profession, as I judge. However, if you think she looks her intended part, I do highly value your opinion. You have presented her as she is, so I trust you feel confident in this presentation.
Yes. I agree with you about her shoulders. And please watch the groin cohesion. I know this is a preview to wor from, but the "barbie doll" joints effect sort of steals my eye...
I appreciate the shading to highlight coloration contrast. Umm. I am thinking that her ankle "socks" should probably be matched in height. Unmatched socks would probably be considered a serious blemish, especially for a visual performer of her sort. I suppose she might have overcome that "blemish" if you really want her to have it, and she is just so widely famed now that no one really cares or notices. It might even be a good point for her to get put down about when she ends up on Centriiost. I do prefer that she have almost perfectly matched socks, though...
The name you suggest will be fine. I love names with apostrohphies! Though the parrot Disney character in "Aladdin" was named Iago...
"Granny calling Tia, Tia..." Hee hee! You are a real imaginative nut! Carry on!
Yes. VERY lovely feet. Styled quite acceptably. I should have picked up about the feet in Leah's work on Mri. I let quite humanlike feet slip by me there, as I recall.
She is ready for the CDSS. Have fun!
~ Skyler
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that cant be good ><
did you want her to look more innocent? sexy?
don't like her hair? want it longer?
did you like the longer ankle sock or the shorter one?
no barbie doll effect? was the area in osniature the more acceptable one? as if straighter instead of curved?
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Well, I see her as a skilled performer who deigns to adopt a seductive air in her dancing unless she desperately wants something. As she must watch her diet and keeps to a rigorous exercise routine for the sake of her figure, I also imagine that while young and perhaps very inclined to feelings of hot passion, she would have considerable sexual self-control. Being full of herself, she would give intimate favors rarely and seek same even less often. A sort of "royal, distant star" to the males who admire her purely for her body, and charming but aloof to those who actually appreciate her for her art.
So, I suggest that while she is far from "innocent", I do think she would affect that air rather more often than a seductive one. Not to say she is not "sexy", but if that is the impression one gets looking at her, I do not think it should be becuase she particularly has to try to seem that way. I suppose "sexy" is all in the makeup, clothing, pose and expression, and perhaps the hair style. I do think longer, loose hair tends to be "sexier".
You might make her hair longer if you think best, but I think it is quite long enough. Oh! I think I know what it is! To me, ballet dancing - or something very the like - is about precision and order. So I think it is the fact you have presented her hair(wig?) styled so wildly that put me off. For her actual performances, I imagine it might be an annoyance to her to have her hair going every which way, so I think she would have her hair "done up" some way, to keep in it good order and out of her face.
I definitely prefer the shorter one. The one reaching to above the knee is just "too much" to call and ANKLE sock. That much counter coloration just seems to "take over", if you understand what I mean. I would not really care either way if Tia was your own character.
By "Barbie doll effect" I am refering to the way her inner thighs seem to have clefts, as though her legs are attatched to her pelvic area after the fashion of barbie dolls. Being as fit and slim as she is, she must have a smooth composition at her major joints or she may appear a little "flabby". The way her groin nestles between her inner thighs just looks odd to me, specifically the joining curves. If you do not see what I mean, then nevermind. It is really not worth bothering with, I am sure.
An eyeful of autumn to you!
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ah, i thought to present a geisha styled hair (all neat and pinned up) with a headdress in one of her clothing views.
would you prefer to have her with straight hair in her nude view? sleek perhaps.....mmmmm *will think of something*
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Sorry. I should not let first impressions get to me.
The preview hair style is fine for one view. And try "sleek" or whatever you settle on for another. And then the "neat/pinned up" presentation in one of her clothed views. And then there are the two facials. I suppose the hairless/bald presentation will be best for one of the facials? Actually the "bald" presentation would probably be best for her nude view. And then you have the other facial to further experiment with...
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ive completed her new nude view, clothing one and two and starting on the faces.
i was reserving the bald view for one of the close ups because it'll suit well if she looks annoyed at someone having stolen her wig....(you'll see)
and ive tried a new way of drawing the groin area so hopefully this will be more pleasing.
back to work!
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done. i hope you don't mine, i did an alternative pose but didn't clothe that one.
so she has one nude front, two clothings, two faces and one alternative nude pose....mainly because im hopelessly tired.....
has an impromptu tutoring session with a student ><
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That is more than acceptable! Sleep well tonight...
You have a lot to offer as a mentor, I am sure...
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You were tired! I think you meant "Tia"...
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