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Published: 2007-09-26 05:39:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Sketch for 's Centriiost projectThis is the preview of Osniature a unicoe.
Her species is a fwemgordj?
She is shorter than most unicoe with an ample body. Small rounder face and long wavy mane and tail. her fetlocks and forelocks are covered in thick wavy fur. one arm is drawn without fur to give variety if skyler wants the arms to be bare or otherwise.
her hooves are covered under the fetlocks.
she sports a bellybutton ring and two breast rings.
art and conception belongs to me.
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Dear Muarw;
"Fwegorj".
The eyes are superb and the feathering is great, as well as the proportions you have depicted her in; fitting for her smaller stature, I think.
I have several things to "pick on", but if you do not want to revise them, I will not complain. However, if you want to get things the way I prefer soas I will not bother you again, it would be better to make the adjustments now, rather then get into a very deep rut. Especially if you might do quite a few unicoe characters.
Face: not too good for expressiveness, I do not think. I like her face/head, but expressions are a consideration.
Horn: it is to be curved slightly back for most unicoe femas. I might have mentioned that there are to be exceptions, but I do not prefer Osniature to be such a case. And I do not think it should be so sharp at its tip.
Breasts: I think you have the basic sense of what I have specified in the case of the unicoe breasts. I am not wholely displeased with Osniature's as they are now, but I would like them to generally be considerably less pronounced in their lower curve(or "droop"), a little less pronounced overall, and more ovoid, fairly close to the actual udders of mares. I believe Zersen has got the breast physiology quite close, if I recall, including the nipples. [Exceptions are of course unicoe femas in milk, but I will have very few femas presented in their CDSSs in that state.]
Hoovingers: still need some ironing out. I can fix you up with a reference sketch if you like, as it seems I have been describing what I want in misleading or inaccurate terms.
Coat of the arms: will be full as on the left or shaved down in layers. Something to experiment with. But the feathering will have its continueance along the arm, over the wrist and down each "finger" to the hoovingers.
I do believe that everyting else is a solid "keep".
Any questions?
~ Skyler
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yup, better to get details now than later
i'll be doing expressions in her bust shots as part of the cdss agreement. as these are fullbody better to focus on the body?
i'll fix the horn.
when you say oviod, do you mean oblong or simply small and closer to the chest so they are less pronounced?
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Glad you agree. I feel better about pestering you now.
I do agree with your reasoning. However, even when I look at the overall I like the details to be fitting and accurate, if possible.
Thank you. Warwind has a bit too much curve for Buhaji; I think Zersen's character had a good horn to model from.
By "ovoid" I mean oblong. However, "small and closer to the chest so they are less pronounced" is on the right track too...
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